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post Jan 7 2009, 12:50 AM
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Woah, a rare person to see!
Glad to see you're still around Luku! smile.gif
Im still interested in seeing what you wrote if you ever get the time to digitise it in some way.
And, oh yeah! – Life is only to filled with surprises!

Thank's to you too Sigismund! smile.gif


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post Jan 7 2009, 02:00 PM
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the wait has just about killed me so I'm still looking forward to how this one comes out


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post Jan 7 2009, 02:09 PM
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Yeah, I'm round my parents untill Monday to supervise the installation of a wood burning fire whilst the folks are still at work....so a bit more net time for me.. smile.gif
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post Jan 15 2009, 06:46 AM
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Any luck, CMG? I can help out, if you need an additional hand to finish off this round smile.gif


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post Jan 15 2009, 10:41 AM
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Well thank you Sigismund, but I will have it up come Sunday. smile.gif


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post Jan 15 2009, 05:26 PM
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Yay! biggrin.gif AoD goodness for me to read after the exams on Wednesday! Expect to see a filling piece with a pict image soon CMG. It's just after battle 13 when Hive Primus goes up in smoke. I just need to ask where General Frost was at the time of the explosion. Was she with Amorphous or with Smith?

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QUOTE (Brother Cambrius @ Jan 15 2009, 06:00 PM) *
Yay! biggrin.gif AoD goodness for me to read after the exams on Wednesday! Expect to see a filling piece with a pict image soon CMG. It's just after battle 13 when Hive Primus goes up in smoke. I just need to ask where General Frost was at the time of the explosion. Was she with Amorphous or with Smith?

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Glad to hear you plan on making yet more material for the AoD Cambrius, but dont let it get in the way of your exams!

Well, The Battle for the Underhive (Battle 13) was a few weeks after the Battle for the Mid-hive and the Nex Spensa, so she was not with Amorphous any more, and Smith was taking over the ground command briefing for her, so she wasn't with him either.
Looking at the intro story for Battle 13, we can see that:
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"... General Frost has landed troops and is currently working her Imperial Guard Battalions overtime to fully secure Hive Secundus. – Also known as The Icicle."

So Storm was at Hive Secundus with a large portion of her Guard force, leaving her some 80140 km away from Hive Primus, when Battle 13 was fought.

Oh and remember that not all of Primus was damaged.
It was primeraly the underhive and some of the lower hive that took the brunt of the damage.
A couple of hive towers collapsed and the rest of the hive was left shaken from the tremors, but the Hive is still very much intact and in the possession of the Imperials. – After all, so far the Imperial side is leading the AoD.

Hope that clear some things up and Im looking forward to seeing your material! smile.gif
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post Jan 18 2009, 11:46 PM
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Well it seems that I am going to be a day or two delayed; again...

So far I've been trying to focus on creating an integrated Battle 5 and Round 1 story; but with so many months of ideas and notes on post-its, my iTouch, and two computers, Im finding that sorting through it all to make a seamless story that will set the tone for the AoD in round two, is taking a lot more time than originally anticipated.
So instead, I will be putting the finishing touches on TDA's Battle 5 story tomorrow and wait one more week before the end story is posted up.
That means Battle 5 will be up Monday, or Tuesday at the latest. – Again: Sorry about the delay!
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post Jan 19 2009, 02:57 PM
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Hehe, it's all become the black sheep of round one now hasn't it?

Perhaps a sign to come?
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post Jan 22 2009, 05:55 AM
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Well, it seems I have vastly under estimated the scope of this story and the research that I've needed to make to conclude it.
That topped by RL issues getting in the way and we have a recipy for a looong wait.
Still, the story is close to conclusion and though late as usual, Ive now finally decided to divide the thing into three parts.
My guess is that it will be better this way anyway as it may get a bit long for most people to swallow otherwise.

Anyway, this first part was written by TheDarkApostle, edited and suplemented by myself.
Give great credit to TDA, for it is well deserved!

So with that, let me just say this:
BATTLE 05, PART 01, IS UP!


PART 02 IS UP!


PART 03 IS UP!


PART 04 IS UP!


PART 05 IS UP!


PART 06 IS UP!


PART 07 IS UP!
ENJOY!




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