Severus6

You might go so far as making the Admiral nearly as bad as the renegade that he has sworn to destroy or maybe in only certain ways. The nemesis that your boy in all truthfulness realy needs,...it keeps him sharp, on edge and wary as much as the Lieutenants under his command. Severus6

The shop is no longer in Yongson,...it is either moved or gone the way of the dinosaur. Never fails,.... Seversu6

There are never enough details. Its as if you are saying that there are too many skulls for the Skull Throne; to much blood for the Blood god. Far to many rounds for the heavy bolter when facing the uncountable 'Nid hordes or possibly saying "I think we have over done it with Terminators in the Deathwing." No good sir, there are never enough details in an IA and certainly not possibly enough attention paid to them. Continue to write, create and enjoy. Severus6

Other than the fact than this is extremely good,...you had me at "sullied", I can only see a few things here and there that may need to be sqared away a bit more. 1. The quote or reference about individuals not bowing to his leadership leaving by the airlock comes across as somewhat trite. I would not use it. Its not necessary and quite out of character compared to what follows storywise. 2. Make no references to the Space Wolves,....its not needed. 3. The "Magos" is a wonderful idea,...what I suggest is that have additionally a rogue Apothocarey; one that has come to your ranks via rather dubious means. That is the second foil for your main character. He and the Magos are against each other for obvious reasons,....if you wanted it to be a bit more touch and go, add a third individual. Possibly an up and comer, a valuable bodyguard or psuedo trusted Lieutenant. Your boy would play all three against each other,....and it would get nasty. 4. The references to a quasi legitimatcy due to the fact that he is controlling the sector and not the individual pirate bands is a wonderful twist. That and the fact that you have planetary governors who are buying into it fits the bill rather nicely. You might,...just might,.... go so far as to say that the Iron Gods are now recruiting for Initiates and Scouts if they have the ability to replenish their ranks with harvested geneseed. Just a few thoughts, hope they help. Severus6

However, if you did take a squad or two of Marines you could simply say that they are a varient of Praetorian. Severus6

You of course mean Custers' last stand as in George Armstrong Custer at the Battle of the Little Bighorn (1876) not custard as in a type of pudding that goes in a pastry,... ;) Severus6

I guess the real question is, are you all finished with the puerile behavior? If not, then all involved can expect to get a warning and this thread will be shut down. Ferrata has already explained the ground rules and as I am out of patience this is the last verbal warning you (those obviously involved) will receive. :( =]I[= Severus6 =]I[=

Well, if you are not going to use plasti-card or change the model in any way then no,...dont glue. Severus6

Only two,...special scenarios and points were at the Apoc level. Severus6

Agreed,...in friendly games I dont think it should matter. I would check with the tourney organizer or the store owner before I brought it in for the big games though. Still, it would definately look good. Severus6

Which type of Bionicle as I think the standard size woud be perfect. That and what type of Knight will you be making? Severus6

No problem,...generally when I think Knight World, I tend to drift into thoughts of techno feudalism,... Severus6

Generally a Knight World is a planet that has very close ties with the AM and ,for the most part, provides food and other resources to the Forge Worlds in exchange for Knight Titans and other firepower/equipment. This equipment and Knights are distributed to the ruling/higher level warrior classes of the world which then are used for protection; defense of the planet and are at times requested to march with the forces of the AM. Severus6

Agreed,...but then you have a different varient of Knight. Dont get me wrong it will be a fine addition but have you considered the loss of the CCW on the Knight or does it not concern you? Severus6

Its a real good location; lots of gamers and folks who generally like to hang out with that crowd regardless of what you play. I was always taken real good care of at "Book Stan". I am not very familiar with the other places, but variety can never hurt. Severus6