HellChyld Posted November 11, 2007 Share Posted November 11, 2007 Knowledge of the Captain amd a crappy drawing.......:rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Cambrius Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Any more news on this Hasoroth? Is school still driving you down? I'm suffering the same. :D Cambrius Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hasoroth Posted December 2, 2007 Author Share Posted December 2, 2007 Chapter 2: “INCOMING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Cambrius Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 YESYESYES!!! :) Thankyou so much Hasoroth! I knew it would come someday. Nice to see Helias in there, although I didn't expect him to be commanding the Astartes on the ground until Sargeant Caleb turned up. What an honour. I hope the thrid chapter won't take too long as this one did. Cambrius Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Savage Mortician Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Worth the wait mate! dont worry about time between posts, real life caught up with me too and I havent done any writing in a good while. Its good, gripping stuff with only the odd grammatical error which is easily overlooked. The only thing I did notice is that Caleb gives Ekton two sets of orders, one to follow him, and one to link up with the surface squad. Other than that, good stuff, looking forward to the next installment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hasoroth Posted December 2, 2007 Author Share Posted December 2, 2007 Changed Mort, made a mistake there, Tyrar was supposed to take Ektons place to group up with the surface Marines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the-betrayer Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Totally awesome! Good to see Llywelyn getting stuck in to those foul heretics. Whats the ETA on part three? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solid snake drive Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 Yay!! That was great. Can't wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merkava Posted December 5, 2007 Share Posted December 5, 2007 Loving it. I'll be back to doing the kill team in the new year. I think my wife got me a SW box so I'll have bits there. Right now I'll be working on entries for the local Golden Goblin painting contest. Last year winners got an army box. Wish me luck! And Hasoroth I'm anxiously waiting on the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bellicose Posted December 5, 2007 Share Posted December 5, 2007 Storm a post office, that heroism right there, I'm sure the inside of those places exist in the warp. They lose that much stuff. :( A well worthwhile wait, great stuff and I look forward to reading chapter 3. Keep up the good work. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Cambrius Posted December 5, 2007 Share Posted December 5, 2007 I'm sure the inside of those places exist in the warp. They lose that much stuff. :( So that's where the missing benefits discs have gone. Tzeeentch is probably looking at them devising plans on alluring evreryone into his grasp (well the politicians definitely) ;) Cambrius Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Savage Mortician Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 I'm sure the inside of those places exist in the warp. They lose that much stuff. :) So that's where the missing benefits discs have gone. Tzeeentch is probably looking at them devising plans on alluring evreryone into his grasp (well the politicians definitely) ;) Cambrius Of COURSE! Tzeentch did it! Somebody should tell Paul Grey. Weve had orders to tear the post room apart at work looking for those things, but it looks like some sort of chaotic summoning is needed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bellicose Posted December 9, 2007 Share Posted December 9, 2007 Its nice to read someone else's fluff. took a short break from my own little project and this was the first port of call. Waiting for the next chapter avidly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zengar Posted December 10, 2007 Share Posted December 10, 2007 Hurray! I'm so happy to read another chapter. Very excited about the next chapter. Especially since I just reread Brothers of the Snake in the meantime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the-betrayer Posted December 31, 2007 Share Posted December 31, 2007 hey, any news on the next part? I was just thinking, if a lot of things are getting in the way Hasoroth, maybe get every one to chip in? maybe avery one write a chapter? I like where this is going and it was be a shame for it to be lost to the warp. peace :drool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zengar Posted December 31, 2007 Share Posted December 31, 2007 I quite agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solid snake drive Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 Me too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merkava Posted January 16, 2008 Share Posted January 16, 2008 Finished building the kill team last night, pics to follow some time later. I've got a few ideas floating in my head.....now just to put the to keyboard and hopefully come up with something that makes sense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Cambrius Posted January 18, 2008 Share Posted January 18, 2008 Good good Merkava. I look forward to seeing how Helias turned out. :tu: Cambrius Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceres Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 Indeed, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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