NightrawenII Posted June 3, 2009 Share Posted June 3, 2009 Dark Scorpions ....the Lost... .....the Forgotten... .....the Cursed... New paint-scheme: Also the Chapter was renamed to Manticora Warriors.;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Draco Posted June 3, 2009 Share Posted June 3, 2009 Some good points Although deemed as uninhabitable, the planet have a human inhabitants this line needs changing to something like, 'Although deemed as uninhabitable, the plant does have some human inhabitants' you just need to explain everything in more detail ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightrawenII Posted June 22, 2009 Author Share Posted June 22, 2009 The homeworld and Beliefs section updated. I will add a Origins and Gene-seed (and maybe a Organisation) section in no time. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gil galed Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 if its a desert why does it have killer planets, one of the defining features of a desert is that they are almost lifeless, would some form of creature not work better (still however adopting you 'grey time' for when it moves) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightrawenII Posted June 22, 2009 Author Share Posted June 22, 2009 if its a desert why does it have killer planets, one of the defining features of a desert is that they are almost lifeless, would some form of creature not work better (still however adopting you 'grey time' for when it moves) What is it a *killer planets*? And also it isnt desert like Sahara but more like Mexico coutryside. The planet is dry and almost lifeless, but not only sand and rock, the closer to polar the more hospitable Polar Area Source: Desert hehe, it need a update. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gil galed Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 if its a desert why does it have killer planets, one of the defining features of a desert is that they are almost lifeless, would some form of creature not work better (still however adopting you 'grey time' for when it moves) What is it a *killer planets*? And also it isnt desert like Sahara but more like Mexico coutryside. The planet is dry and almost lifeless, but not only sand and rock, the closer to polar the more hospitable Polar Area Source: Desert hehe, it need a update. :lol: hehe planets lol, i ment plants Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightrawenII Posted June 23, 2009 Author Share Posted June 23, 2009 if its a desert why does it have killer planets, one of the defining features of a desert is that they are almost lifeless, would some form of creature not work better (still however adopting you 'grey time' for when it moves) What is it a *killer planets*? And also it isnt desert like Sahara but more like Mexico coutryside. The planet is dry and almost lifeless, but not only sand and rock, the closer to polar the more hospitable Polar Area Source: Desert hehe, it need a update. :lol: hehe planets lol, i ment plants Ah, o.k. I changed this bit, the fauna(=animals) are killers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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