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Ferrata

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Hello, as most of you know by now, the Wings of Death are my chapter. I have created others but over all my time as a DIY there has been one chapter that I've been attempting to write. The central themes of the Wings were set down even before I became a Moderator, so easily five years ago. They have been cruel, evil Astartes whose fall was someone elses fault to down right emo marines. The latest few drafts (from about version 4) I have been hoping to achieve a chapter that falls to the clutches of Chaos because of their faults and no-one actually forces them to. Before I thank you all for reading, special mention has to go to Aurelius Rex who deserves to be a co-author on this because he has help me out so much. So, heres to all those people who feel like they a treading water with their chapters, you will eventually make it...even if it does take half a decade! Thanks for reading, Ferrata




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The fall of the Wings of Death is a tale of egocentricity, arrogance and pride. Created to be saviours of the people, the Wings were originally a bright spark of hope in the broken Aetherius Stars. The arrival of brother Astartes doomed the Chapter, beginning a descent into self-pity and mourning of shattered honour. Hounded by angelic-daemons, the Wings blamed their own bereavements on others, finding no fault in their own actions. Their thirst for praise and acceptance drove them into the arms of Chaos, into the bosom of Ynsoldea. In the very place they were meant to bring peace they now bring nothing but destruction, becoming the very thing they were created to destroy.

Origins

The origins of the Wings of Death are rooted at the start of the thirty-third millennium. After several large-scale incursions into the Imperium, numerous fronts had begun to falter under the pressure of the relentless attacks. In response, the High Lords decided there was an urgent requirement for new chapters of the Adeptus Astartes, and ordered a new founding. One such chapter was the Wings of Death who began their life under the tutelage of the Lions Excisio. A naturally barbaric chapter, these veterans guided the young Astartes into the heat of battle.
Astartes of the Wings of Death
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The tract of space known as the Aetherius Stars had once been a fruitful section of the Imperium in the centuries following its assimilation. Unfortunately, after the Great Heresy, they had slowly been lost to His light. Now they had become a breeding ground for Xenos and traitors alike, all threatening to encroach towards worlds that had remained loyal. In order to cleanse the Aetherius Stars, the Wings formed the core of a new Imperial campaign to bring the Olorun system back to the Emperor’s creed. Deeming their work holier than this simple task, the Wings christened their mission the Angelicus Crusade.

Their brutal surgical strikes made the Wings the catalyst for almost all of the victories of the Olorun Campaign, allowing the Imperium to form a stable power base within the Aetherius Stars. As the Imperial Guard finished pacifying the worlds of the Olorun system and specialists brought in to structure the new lands, the Wings looked outwards into the Stars. Continuing their crusade, the Chapter quickly brought a handful of systems to heel gaining a reputation as a valuable ally of the newly formed Olorun Sub-sector Command. Watching eyes hidden deep in the darkness had noticed the growing wealth and power of the Imperium in their lands; they gathered their forces to assault the gains of the Wings.

The Ork Empire Shakgrot and the Chaos war host of De’Kol formed an unholy alliance, urging each other into the guns of the Imperium. It was against these two foes that the Wings tasted their first defeats but also their first truly heroic victories. The defence of three systems finally turned into a counter-assault across four, guardsmen advancing towards the banners of the Chapter who had already found battle. With the enemy routed and forced to flee back into the void of the Aetherius Stars, the Wings had become the figurehead of the sub-sector, toasted across more than a dozen planets and revered as demigods of the Emperor. The Shakgrot-De’Kol wars had only succeeded in cementing the bond between the Chapter and their allies.

Chasing the last remnants of the De’Kol war host, the Wings tore through countless worlds. This onslaught doubled the region requiring the defence of the Imperium, surpassing the capabilities of the sub-sector forces. Although Command pleaded with the Chapter to halt their expansion and to allow time of recuperation, stabilisation and indoctrination of the new populations, the Wings refused. In their eyes, not fighting their crusade when they had the strength to do so would be a crime against the Chapter.
“Surt lost. Yama destroyed. Ksitgarba, Beletser V, Moirai all under Ork control. Pan-Ku currently under siege. Minos Prime, and Hather Forge celebrating their saviours the Disciples of Man.”

The report did not make for a comfortable read – all those years spent fighting. The pains and scars his body still felt, the Brothers killed in action. Destroyed by foolish commanders who could not keep Imperial planets under Imperial control. The Aetherius Stars he had left in their guardianship had disappeared. What had become of his sacrifice? These snivelling diplomats may call such cowardice an essential tactic, an ancient stratagem that had served the sector well. To him it was retreat, running away from their duty.

To think it was an Astartes who suggested such an idea, a brother warrior, a man took from the same gene-stock as himself. Either such a leader was a spineless man, his men unable to do a task that the Emperor had set for them. Or, maybe, that they had foreseen the accolades they would receive for returning the worlds to the Imperium. Maybe these Disciples wanted the Chapter’s throne, maybe they craved the respect that the Wings themselves received.

The answer was quite simple really; no Astartes could be such a coward...

Soon these combat loses became too much, their recruitment rate could not sustain the Chapter any longer. Reluctantly the Wings ceased active operations, leaving the Aetherius Stars for the first time since entering them. The Chapter's retreat abandoned the under-strength Imperial Guard regiments in the hands of a newly founded chapter; the Disciples of Man.
For a time the Wings were absent from the Stars, vowing not to return until they could swear never to falter in their duty. A new influx of recruits swelled the ranks and trained rigorously across dozens of worlds, eager to prove themselves in battle. These skirmishes were for a distant administration for whose internal politics and troubles the Wings cared little. They had become blinkered to the larger purpose of their mission, granting them unquestionable faith, but a cold isolation that would eventually damn them.

Firmly believing that they had once again achieved optimum-fighting efficiency, the Wings returned to the Olorun sub-sector and the Aetherius Stars but found the situation much changed. Many of the worlds, which the Chapter had shed blood for, had been lost to resurgent enemies, the Imperium forced to shorten its borders to be able to fully defend them. Outraged and hurt by the wasting of their lives, the Chapter lost themselves in the history of the past one hundred years, desperate to find answers for their pain. They found such a thing in the Disciples of Man, those who had suggested the withdrawal from the most isolated planets to allow the Imperium to regroup and secure the ground it had managed to keep. The strategy had worked beautifully, the Disciples were able to push the enemy back and retake many of the lost planets more thoroughly than the Wings had ever managed. Nevertheless, in the eyes of the Wings, they had been cowards.

The tactical sense of this move was lost on the Wings, and their distaste for the Disciples only worsened as they discovered that many recaptured worlds now praised the new chapter as their saviours. The Wings believed the young chapter were either unable to do their duty, or deceitful for allowing planets to fall only to return them for their own glory. The Wings threw themselves into a series of vicious campaigns aimed at those lost worlds, a move that would only damage their reputation amongst the commanders of the sub-sector.

It was during this period that the first of a number of extraordinary events occurred. On the small mining planet of Rhamiel, an enemy stronghold that a Wings detachment had been unable to secure suddenly fell in the middle of the night to an unknown force. Advancing on the now undefended fortress, the Wings discovered no trace of their unidentified ally bar a scattering of unnatural feathers that the chapter’s librarians confirmed carried the stench of the daemonic about them. Believing the traitorous enemy to have summoned warp-beings that had then turned upon them, the detachment handed over command of the compound to the Imperial Guard, for defensive duties were not the responsibility of mighty Astartes.

The events upon Rhamiel were not isolated, and over the following centuries a further seven cases were reported to the sub-sector’s high command. All followed the same pattern; the enemies of the Wings mysteriously slaughtered whilst little trace of their assailants remained. The reports each contained mention of feathers of daemonic origin and all concluded that their enemy had fallen to the Ruinous Powers that had been rife in the Aetherius Stars after the Heresy. Eventually, though, doubt began to fall upon the Wings of Death.

During the Culex Rebellion alone, four such instances occurred, causing much speculation from Imperial scholars. The revolt caused renewed vigour to understand these appearances, and the Exspes Testimony was drafted with the sole intention of researching the daemons. Unfortunately, the author was not without vice and eager for fame, he played to the scaremongers who believed the Wings of Death to be involved. Due to the decisiveness of the text and the sub-sector's fever against corruption, an external investigation into the Chapter was ordered.

Chapter Master Adnachiel deplored such accusations, but was supremely confident that the Wings would be exonerated. The intrusive investigation was allowed to proceed with the Chapter welcoming Inquisitor Cathegus into the vast Library of Angels that held all their records. Their engagements were watched over by either by aides of the Inquisitor or brothers of the Disciples of Man, ensuring that the Wings played no role in summoning the daemons.

Although their loyalty was in question, the Wings were fierce in their pursuit of enemies, engaging in countless conflicts across many systems. Cathegus’ verdict, entitled the Perfidelis Report, concluded that the Wings of Death were indeed loyal to the Emperor and the daemonic events that had hounded them were merely unfortunate coincidences at best or a cunning strategy by the Ruinous Powers to disrupt the Imperium at worst. Though given a full pardon and an apology by all those involved in the accusations, the Chapter never forgave those who had doubted them and further blamed the Disciples of Man for aiding the investigation.

The Fall from Grace

The Wings became a much-isolated force after the Perfidelis Report, their trust in their allies broken by how little support they had received in their time of need. They looked on enviously as the Disciples of Man acted as the vanguard for numerous famous campaigns, whilst the Wings headed their own, smaller ones. Only able to gain assistance from a few Imperial Guard regiments, the Chapter absorbed the brunt of these wars. Even during these dark days, the Chapter’s faith in the Angelicus Crusade’s holy cause drove them into the heat of battle, each engagement earning them back a fragment of their precious honour.

During this time, the daemonic creatures that had plagued the Chapter were present more than ever. Whispers of the Perfidelis Report begin to resurface; maybe the conclusion had been hasty, maybe victory counts alone had persuaded the Inquisitor. Once more, suspicion began to fall upon the Chapter, deeming their isolation from the Imperium an ill fortune, perhaps they had already strayed too far from the Emperor’s gaze. Through all of this, the Chapter prevailed, their martial strength and unwavering faith never allowing them to falter.

As more praise and gratitude was laid in the hands of the Chapter, the warmth of the Emperor slowly returned to the hearts of the Wings of Death. Their campaigns grew in size, returning to the splendour of their earlier actions, and even occurrences of their daemonic stalkers began to reduce in frequency. Sadly, just as the Chapter seemed to be leaving the depression of the Perfidelis Report behind them, fate struck their pride another cruel blow.

In the great halls of Aeternus, heart of the Olorun system, the bells tolled in celebration for it was three thousand years since the coming of the Disciples of Man. Whilst the capital world praised the younger chapter, the Wings of Death to a marine were engaged in battle. At the forefront of their minds was the lack of their own remembrance, their broken vanity driving them forward into the ranks of the enemy. The tangible relationships that had been painfully reformed lay obliterated in this single instance.

The guns fell silent once more, the thunder and roar of exotic cannon ceasing for another brief respite. Countless dead littered the landscape, the broken bodies of the Imperial Guard, the mutant forms of the Chaos defenders, and the armoured Battle Brothers. It would have been easier to bombard the planet from above, but such cowardly ways of war could not nurse the crippled hearts of the Wings of Death. All along the line, they prepared for one more assault, the third and final push against the hard-rock walls of the fortress.

Where was their celebration? Who had congratulated them when they had served for three thousand years? What had they done to deserve this misgiving? Nowhere. No one. Nothing. Those were the true answers. The Wings had been disrespected, disregarded and, worst of all, replaced by weaklings who pretended to be their masters.

The Wings would not bend their knee to such folk. The Wings would not falter on the battlefield. The Aetherius Stars were their birthright and nothing and no one was going to take it from them.

Believing they could resolve the sins of others with the blood of the enemy, the Wings tore towards the edges of Imperial space. Abandoning the hordes of the Imperial Guard behind them to garrison duties, the Chapter took the burden of the causalities as they attempted to find peace once more. True to their word, they never ceased in their holy cause, even when reduced to fewer than two Battle Companies. The advancement of their campaigns was slow, having to return to planets numerous times, as rebellious forces usurped their new lords. Only their faith in themselves kept them fighting, unable to accept they could fail in their duty. These wars would have decimated the Wings beyond the Imperium’s ability, or willingness, to rebuild the Chapter, if it was not for the warp-beings.
In'qua projected her mind across the battlefield, reaching out to the emotions of Ynsoldea's children. She could taste their pain on her lips; feel their anger as it tore through her body in sheer ecstasy, their misery as it coiled around her heart. These beautiful destroyers, these tormented souls, oh, the power they offered her goddess was insurmountable. She would guide them to the bosom of the Black Angel. Their anguish, their agony, their pride, it was intoxicating. She giggled and laughed like a young scholar girl as pleasure racked her form. She moaned like a hive-girl earning her keep, the vigour of their broken souls was more thrilling then any drug. Her psychic form screamed with delight as she summoned daemons from the warp. Her angels would aid the Chosen of Ynsoldea to draw them into Her arms.
As the Chapter teetered on the brink of destruction, a rare joint engagement with the Disciples of Man occurred. Though this much aggrieved the Wings, they could not refuse, being personally requested in the call for aid. On the world of Puch, the governor had declared himself successor to the throne of De’Kol, and in doing so challenged the Imperium to sovereignty of the Aetherius Stars. The remaining brothers of the Wings swept towards the throne room, eager to prove their worth with the Disciples also on the field.

With a primal fury, the Chapter disregarded tactical caution and broke through countless ambushes and traps. Without warning, the halls flooded with the crazed citizens of Puch and it seemed the Wings would fall into the history books forever. In their hour of need, it was not the white armour of the Disciples of Man who came to their aid, but the white wings of daemons. With their vigour renewed, the Wings of Death soon brought victory to the Imperium.

In the aftermath of the Puch Rebellion, the Lord Governor of the sub-sector, who originated from the world, held a great festival to rejoice in the triumph. Not wanting to taint their Lord Governor’s home world, the reports left out all mention of the daemons that had aided the Imperium, with the Disciples of Man taking the honour as the saviours. Though they were invited to join the celebration, the Wings never entered the Olorun system, instead limping away to lick their wounds.
It was a turbulent time for the Wings of Death, though their ranks swelled with new recruits to fill the void left by the deaths of so many brothers, they were born into a bitter chapter. The Misgiving of Puch had torn the last shred of hope out of the Chapter, never again would they let lesser men insult them. In this aura of misery, a prophet visited them. A woman who spoke of the Chapter like a child she had nurtured, a prodigy that had matured. She reminded them of who had saved them on Puch, who had aided them countless times before – not the Imperium, not their brethren Astartes, but the angels their shared patron had sent. With the slightest wave of her hand, ghostly images appeared aboard the Eagle’s Pride, all those brothers that had fallen since the start of the Angelicus Crusade – stood side-by-side were ancient Chapter Masters like Adnachiel and Ambriel, marines who had given their lives centuries before. The gesture was too much for the shattered pride of the Wings of Death and they realised the true destiny of their lives. Without a single voice in favour of the Emperor, the Wings pledged their hearts to the prophet and her patron, Ynsoldea. Their first act in Her service was redemption.

From the Darkness

The Wings disappeared from Imperial contact for nearly half century, believed to be recuperating from their losses on the fringes of space, before emerging in the Discelo system, home to the Disciples of Man. Offering gestures of brotherhood and penance for their actions, the Wings were granted access to the most sacred of inner sanctums of the Disciples' Fortress-Monastery. From here, they tore the soul out of the loyal chapter without risking the lives of their own men, catching a peaceful enemy unawares. In a slaughter that lasted for seventeen nights and seventeen days, the entire planetary population of Discelo was culled and its cities burnt to the ground. The desecration of the world did not end with simple bloodshed; the monastery itself was reduced to nothing more than rubble, but not before anything of use was pillaged. By the time the Disciples had heard of the destruction of Discelo, the Wings had long disappeared.
Extract from the Degeneris Report, from a Brief History of the Wings of Death, M38 529-893
732.M38 – Huntsmen of Kali
In the chronicles of Imperial history against the Wings of Death, no other battle deserves as much respect as those valiant defenders of Kali. Although not a miraculous victory those more famous battles were, this engagement sparked a new tactic against the Chapter – forcing the Wings to a battlefield of the Imperium’s choosing through the subtle manipulation of their pride. For nearly a decade, the Imperial Commander, upon advice, spread rumours that Kali was the safest place within the Aetherius Stars.

When the force of the Wings of Death finally arrived, they hastily deployed over a hundred marines on the ground to prove their worth. As they marched upon the vast armouries, they found them hollow and defended by a skeleton force. High above them, the Imperial Navy revealed itself from the shadow of a nearby gas giant. Scuttling the Wing's strike cruiser quickly, the Imperial admirals watched as it burnt through the thick atmosphere of the planet below. Isolated and alone, the company of Astartes became the prey of the Imperium.
Over the next century, the Wings of Death set about systematically destroying the chapter they felt had betrayed them. It began with an assault on the Strike Cruiser Emperor’s Hope, a swift, but brutal engagement in the darkness of space that paved the way for a campaign that would result in the massacre of the Disciples. The Wings stalked the loyalist chapter without respite, eventually butchering their remaining marines on the fields of Nephtys.

Since the destruction of the Disciples, the Wings of Death have embarked on an all-out assault on the Aetherius Stars. Their campaign, dubbed the Daemonicus Crusade by Imperial scholars, has crumbled the Olorun sub-sector in size and wealth, the planets’ worth to the Imperium barely better than before the creation of the Wings. This bloodshed has been brought on two fronts, the civil unrest and out-right rebellion caused through the preaching of Ynsoldea. As entire cultures erupt in brutal wars from within, there is little the Imperium can do besides pray.

Unfortunately, this is a mere ripple of desolation in comparison to that the Chapter itself weighs upon the sub-sector. The fleets of the Wings appear without warning, dropping out of the Immaterium to assault the planet of their choosing. These poorly defended worlds have little hope against the might of Astartes, and soon only blood soaks the ground. Before any effective response can be mustered, the Wings retreat into the shadows to plan their next attack. Massacres such as that of Sorush, and the Dawn of the Endless Night, have ripped the beating heart out of the Olorun sub-sector. Morale and hope are now myths barely whispered by Imperial Commanders, as world after world plummets into anarchy. Even the capital world of Olorun has not escaped the fury of the Wings, the traitorous marines having set foot on the surface three times to bludgeon the civilians into despair.

There have, however, been some who have made a stand against the renegades, with the most effective being Inquisitor Chigi of the Ordo Malleus. The life work of Chigi, the Degeneris Report, tracked the movements and engagements of the Wings of Death since their creation, and for the first time allowed the Imperium to gain valuable insights into the Chapter. Though their targets are difficult to predict, their thirst for acceptance, even in a negative light, revealed that they could be goaded into wars were others would ignore such obvious traps. This allowed the Wings to be brought to battle on multiple occasions, resulting in shattering wars that damaged both sides dearly. Forced to defend their Hives, the people of Mihr manipulated the Wings in to assaulting the highly fortified spires instead of the many weaker ones. The Veronian 87th claimed a famous victory over the Chapter in the forests of Baron Samedi, setting their names forever in the chronicles of the Imperium.

Away from the gaze of the Imperium, the Wings have found battle against the Orks of the Shakgrot clan, an ancient rivalry that has yet to end. Raiders have foolishly attempted to pillage the fleets of the Chapter, paying in blood for their impetuousness. Alien worlds belonging to the Drakor, Ha'then and Brem-inor have all endured wars with the warriors of Ynsoldea. Though the Wings have never splintered into roaming war bands like many that fall to the clutches of Chaos, they have fought against their Ruinous brethren. The De'Kol Martyrs have been purged from the stars, as have the Prophets of Tze and the Mathanian Armies.

How the Wings are able to resupply their munitions and armour is unknown to the Imperium. The Iron Arrogance is known to act as a forge ship, but alone it should not be sufficient to support the Chapter. Whether they hold an empire or group of worlds to strike out from is unknown, the best evidence only suggesting a small number of isolated planets that pledge their services to the Chapter.

The Degeneris Report contained such powerful information that Chigi and his work proved the greatest threat to the Chapter, and they moved against the Inquisitor relentlessly until they captured him. Since Chigi’s death in the torture chambers aboard the Judgment of Ynsoldea, many aspiring members of the Ordos have attempted to rekindle this work. However, none have had the drive and talents of Chigi, and so the threat the Degeneris Report represents to the Wings of Death diminishes with each passing year.

Creed

Central to the well-being of the Wings of Death is their knowledge that they are superior to all others. To them this is not a belief, it is a fact proved on the battlefield over millennia. They know that their cause is righteous, their sword-arm strong and their guile limitless. Only in Ynsoldea have they found a being worthy of respect outside of the Chapter, as a brother that bears the winged skull will deem himself an avatar of war without equal. Before their fall, they venerated neither their primarch nor the Emperor, these distant figures paling in the light of their own comrades.

Embracing Ynsoldea as their goddess, the Wings opened themselves up to the dogma of Her followers. Ynsoldea is one of the many lesser Chaos gods that form the pantheon of the Ruinous Powers, although Her power is only limited to the stretches of the Aetherius Stars. A warrior-female with broad angelic wings that curl around Her armour body, She is both a mighty soldier and a tormented soul. Legends tell that Her pierced heart continuously bleeds, a wound caused by the mighty Khorne when she challenged for his throne. Known by many names, including the Bleeding Goddess and the Black Angel, She feeds on the anguish of the prideful, the depression felt by those who feel betrayed by weaker beings; within the Wings She found Her greatest source of power.

Those that follow the Black Angel are typically drawn to battle to prove their worth, firm in the knowledge that they are warriors of the truest ilk. Across the Aetherius Stars, there are an increasing number of cults of Ynsoldea as the Wings spread Her message. Alongside the sermons, rituals have filtered down from chapter to worshippers. The veteran piercing of one heart as a sign of respect towards Ynsoldea, echoing Her every bleeding heart has become commonplace amongst the goddess' pilgrims. Such actions are invariably fatal in normal humans, but an Astartes will endure the torment.

The Armada of Light and Recruitment

Traditionally known as the Armada of Light within the Aetherius Stars, the Wings of Death fleet has always been a formidable force. Freshly produced from the shipyards of Lebe V and granted to the Chapter upon creation, the Eagle’s Pride is the flagship of the Armada. As well as being a fierce space faring monster, the Pride is also the heart of the chapter, with the labyrinth of corridors leading from its reliquary, to the vital gene-seed stock that ensures the future of the Wings and the Library of Angels that records their past. When the Armada of Light used to arrive in a system, it was an occasion for hope, salvation and joy. It now stands for dread, misery and destruction.

Extracts from the Degeneris Report, from The Armada of Light: The Broken Torch

...The Wings of Death fleet is a vast armada of destruction, with each vessel able to tear at the unity of the Imperium. At the centre of this deadly weapon are a trio of large ships, the Eagle’s Pride, the Judgement of Ynsoldea and the Iron Arrogance...

...Purposefully built for the Wings of Death upon the creation, the Eagle’s Pride's interior is suited to that of a crusading chapter. With the ability to support an entire chapter from its armoured hull, it alone has the capabilities to produce the vital scouts needed to continue a chapter...

...recently refitted when the Wings of Death acquired her, the Judgement of Ynsoldea has become a lesser twin to the Pride. She formed the cornerstone of a Mechanicus fleet sent to aid the Disciples of Man. To revive the loyal the chapter, the ship contained gene-stock, arms and battle-tanks, only to be captured and re-baptised as the Judgement...

...Birthed from some unknown location deep within the Aetherius Stars, the Iron Arrogance hails from a shipyard corrupted to the will of the Wings of Death. It is certain that the Arrogance is not of Imperial build, the venomous prow riddled with incantations of Ynsoldea. To even look upon the ship is to gamble with insanity...
The recruitment process of the Wings of Death has always been described as barbaric and inhumane, even when they were loyal to the Emperor. Sergeants of the Tenth Company lead their scouts in raids across countless planets, with the single purpose of abducting as many young males as possible. These attacks are often brutal, slaughtering entire societies for a few possible recruits. As these boys are not selected as promising youngsters, the Wings require a far greater number to achieve the same standard of recruits as other chapters and will often take them at a much younger age. Most do not see it past the first few months of recruitment.

Hundreds, if not thousands, are herded into vast holding pens aboard the Eagle’s Pride. Those who cry after their first nights are quickly culled whilst the survivors are forced to compete in gruelling physical activities for the sparse food supplies they are given. Those too weak to win, or unable to break into the many gangs which form, swiftly die. An unfortunate recruit, taken young from their homes, may spend the better part of a decade in these pens, all the time a poisonous hatred for the Chapter building up inside of them.

At the end of the process, revenge is offered when a single Battle Brother is placed in an arena with ten possible recruits each armed with a short dagger. This is the final chance for the youngster to prove himself, even if unwillingly. The marine uses his combat abilities to incapacitate those selected by his sergeant as worthy to become a member of the Wings of Death, whilst the remaining souls are ruthlessly culled. On rare occasions, in a frenzy of hatred, the teens swamp and kill the Battle Brother; it is said that the famous Captain Nisroc single-handedly defeated his foe.

Once selected to become the very thing they despise, a recruit is mind-wiped of all his past memories, his hatred of the Chapter, his home world and even his own name. The next eight years are of constant indoctrination into the ways of the Wings of Death. The scout’s mind becomes versed in the glories of the Chapter; they murmur the litanies of Ynsoldea as they sleep and heroes long dead haunt their dreams. These years are one of total absorption into the Chapter, and when they finally are able to don their suit of power armour, their love for the Wings is unfaltering. The final initiation is the new recruit's naming ceremony were they spend eight days in the Temple of Ynsoldea until She speaks their name to them through the chaplain.
The resentment in their eyes shone brightly, driving them towards the beast that stood before them. His kind had kidnapped them, forced them to live as if animals packed together in the small confines of an iron belly. They had been tested and tried, pitted against each other in combat, on obstacle courses and in puzzle-traps. They had been starved and broken, beaten and forced to kill – they had been destroyed. And now they had the nerve to arm them with daggers and parade around like gods. They would show them that they had underestimated the power of faith in the Emperor, the love of their families they had long been parted from, and the might of their shattered bodies. Without pause for their own safety, they charged the behemoth.

Bohdan watched his, well; he did not know what they were to him, comrades and competitors. They all screamed forward, drunk with the power of a blade. Whilst the Astartes could not strike them all down at once, such lack of tactics would surely lead to their deaths. Waiting for his moment for revenge, Bohdan slowly circled round, watching the carnage in front of him.

Caught almost unaware as the marine lunged forward with a particularly artistic flick of his wrist, Bohdan readied himself. With his foe off-balance, he threw himself forward, his dagger reaching out in front of him. Locking his eyes on the bare muscular neck, the pulsing artery that connected hearts and brain. As if by magic, a hand caught his chest, throwing him through the air. He had been so close; he could have sworn he had seen his knife scrape a thin red line across the marine’s neck. As he smashed against the ground, he curled up into a ball, whispering to himself.

“I am Bohdan, I am Bohdan.”

A shadow loomed over him, hearing his ramblings.

“No, my brother, you are now a member of the Wings of Death.”



















Organisation

The Wings of Death still maintain a strong chain of command, the Chapter Master demanding the respect and obedience of the entire chapter. No longer bound to the Codex Astartes, the Chapter’s numbers have waxed and waned over the millennia since their betrayal, depending on the availability of resources and the attrition of war. At its peak, the Chapter grew to twenty-three companies, although an Imperial campaign, coupled with a number of crushing defeats for the Wings, quickly obliterated many of these companies. It is rumoured amongst the sub-sector that once the Chapter was on the brink of extinction, heralding over two centuries of relative peace.
Captain Purah
Of all the captains to have borne the title in the Wings of Death, few have caused as much commotion as the famous Captain Purah. Not only was he immensely blessed by Ynsoldea, his favoured style of war was counter to that of nearly all of his brothers. Whilst the Wings typically enjoy the swift and agile nature of combat, Purah was a methodical and calculated warrior. He promoted a defensive formation to his company, relying on overwhelming firepower and precision strikes of heavy armour. It was said by the Imperium that the captain fought “like rolling thunder; unstoppable, unbreakable, unbearable.”

Captains are given the freedom of their company, roaming and slaughtering at their own pleasure. The Armada of Light is typically dispersed, so it is difficult to locate and destroy. It also makes it easier for the Wings to survive against the numerous hunters that wish the Chapter dead. Only the Chapter Master ever knows the location of all his captains, and even then, it is frequently retrospectively. This independence spreads to the organisation of the company and how the captain wishes to take his men to battle. Unable to recruit their own initiates, the companies rely on a supply of fresh brothers from the Chapter Master, ensuring captains always answer to the Chapter itself. Such dependence on the Eagle’s Pride has made it a prime target for the Imperium, as its destruction would mark a blow from which the Chapter would find it difficult to recover.

Remarkably, for a renegade chapter, the Wings have remained a coherent force bowing to the will of one man. Although the continuous supply of fresh Astartes demands the loyalty of the captains, it is a deeper respect that ensures the Chapter does not fragment. Placed second to the whole is the wants of personal gain, with complaints of ill justice quickly settled in the duelling cages. As martial ability is the sole character trait important to a brother, even two conflicting personalities will share a mutual regard for one another. This also guarantees that named successors rarely feel the backlash of politics that may dog even loyal chapters of the Imperium.

Combat Doctrine

True to the teachings of the Lions Excisio, the Wings of Death have always favoured the combative arts of warfare. They are not the butchers or the fanatics of other chapters, but instead are absorbed by the finesse of combat, the precision of the blade and the white of the enemy’s eyes. Each marine will pride himself on the long days spent duelling with his brethren, the battle scars that have each taught him a valuable lesson. A cornerstone to the soul of the Chapter is their mastery of such weapons. Upon their implantation of the Black Carapace, a marine must dedicate his life to a single combat weapon; be it the sword, the axe or something more exotic. This plays a pivotal role in the ritual from brother to sergeant, were the Chapter’s artificers masterfully ensure that the rank equates to a weapon of equal power. Even those assigned ranged weaponry are still required to fulfil their oath. Many an enemy has assaulted the Devastators of the Chapter, believing them an easy prey, only to quickly learn the hard way about their mistake.

His head bowed deep in respect, for before him stood the Company’s Preacher of Ynsoldea. The words of dedication flowed over him, the moment capturing both of his beating hearts. Since he had been promoted to sergeant, Vohamanah had felt empty, lost almost. Forced to hand over his beloved punching daggers, he had been without his core, his oath. Now they would be returned to him, their power greater than ever after the artificers had worked ceaselessly on them.
He could feel the energy through the material as his hands caressed the soft cloth. The preacher spoke the last mantras as Vohamanah uncovered the daggers. The click as they fixed into the specially made mounts on the back of his gauntlets sent a thrill through his body. The energy-field visible rippled over the strong metal – he felt complete again.

Like all Astartes, the Chapter specialise in rapid deployment, surgically striking weak sections of the enemy lines. Drop Pods, armoured transports and Land Speeders are frequently used in the Wings of Death forces, their disdain for defensive actions telling in their deployment. The early parts of the Angelicus Crusade only furthered their skills in dealing with such operations as they were quickly shipped from one battlefront to another. Only in rare circumstances would a force deploy by more mundane methods, when the brute force of orbital deployment would only in result in the death of many brothers.

Though most captains favour such methods, some companies operate differently according to the will of their leader. Captain Purah was famed for his defensive, stoic tactics; so counter to the traditional doctrine of the Chapter that the Imperium questioned whether if he was a true son of Ynsoldea. Still, Land Speeders, Assault Marines and Bike squads are commonplace in most forces - the rapid deployment and manoeuvrability of such equipment echoing in the hearts of all Wings.

Gene-Seed

Honoured with the purest of gene-seeds, that of Roboute Guilliman, the Wings can draw their lineage back, through the Lions Excisio, to the Ultramarines themselves. The last samples tithed to the Adeptus Mechanicus before the fall of the Chapter showed no hints of taint or signs of mutation. However, since their traitorous actions, the tendrils have Chaos have spoilt this genetic heritage. Unlike their traitorous brethren that hide within the Eye of Terror, or similar tears in reality, the Wings are not blessed with elongated life spans bar those few especially favoured by Ynsoldea. Mutations are rife amongst some companies, whilst others have remained surprisingly pure. The infamous Captain Sariel purged a vast swathe of the Aetherius Stars before his so-called Possessed Company fully fell to the changing ways of Chaos.

Battle Cry

Whilst “In Ynsoldea’s name!” has become a popular battle cry since their fall, traditionally each brother would scream their own name as they charged into battle. Only the brethren of the Wings of Death would be so vain as to applaud themselves in combat.

Edited by Ferrata, 06 March 2011 - 11:03 AM.


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I really enjoyed the combat doctrine part, the idea of specialising in a single close combat weapon that defines them appeals to me.

Plus the colour scheme is nice, you dont see much orange in Astartes forces!

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A great example to try to work towards! Enjoyed this.
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Great Job!!

Definitely worthy of 5 years of work ^^
 

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Your Bohdan bit is colliding with your Organisation header.
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There were a couple of minor typos as well - will pm them to you when I'm on a proper computer.
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I'm glad to have seen the article slowly take shape over the years. I really enjoyed it, Ferrata. :D
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The last samples tithed to the Adeptus Mechanicus before the fall of the Chapter showed no hints of taint or signs of mutation. However, since their traitorous actions, the tendrils have Chaos have spoilt this genetic heritage.

Only mistake I found in the entire article, although I admit I might have missed some.

A gripping read, to be sure. <_<

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Quite a long IA but a very enjoyable read, great stuff!! ;)

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Sorry that I said "there are a few typos" and then have taken so long to respond. Particularly as upon re-reading in an attempt to find them, I'm struggling to do so. The below very minor bits are offered very much as polish, not criticisms. ;)

To think it was an Astartes who suggested such an idea, a brother warrior, a man took from the same gene-stock as himself. Either such a leader was a spineless man, his men unable to do a task that the Emperor had set for them. Or, maybe, that they had foreseen the accolades they would receive for returning the worlds to the Imperium. Maybe these Disciples wanted the Chapter’s throne, maybe they craved the respect that the Wings themselves received.


"taken" perhaps, rather than "took"?

Soon these combat loses became too much, their recruitment rate could not sustain the Chapter any longer. Reluctantly the Wings ceased active operations, leaving the Aetherius Stars for the first time since entering them. The Chapter's retreat abandoned the under-strength Imperial Guard regiments in the hands of a newly founded chapter; the Disciples of Man.

"abandoned... to the hands" or "left... in the hands". Abandoned... in the hands does sort of work, but is a bit awkward compared to either of those alternatives. This might just be a personal preference, but fwiw.

Firmly believing that they had once again achieved optimum-fighting efficiency, the Wings returned to the Olorun sub-sector and the Aetherius Stars but found the situation much changed.


"optimal fighting"

Many of the worlds, which the Chapter had shed blood for, had been lost to resurgent enemies, the Imperium forced to shorten its borders to be able to fully defend them.

Too many commas in this sentence - "Many of the worlds which the Chapter had shed blood for had been lost to resurgent enemies, the Imperium forced to shorten its borders to be able to fully defend them." it's one of the things I find myself editing in every iteration of every thing I write.

During the Culex Rebellion alone, four such instances occurred, causing much speculation from Imperial scholars. The revolt caused renewed vigour to understand these appearances, and the Exspes Testimony was drafted with the sole intention of researching the daemons. Unfortunately, the author was not without vice and eager for fame, he played to the scaremongers who believed the Wings of Death to be involved. Due to the decisiveness of the text and the sub-sector's fever against corruption, an external investigation into the Chapter was ordered.

"Vigour" not quite the right word there, IMO. Maybe "renewed interest in understanding", or "led to a determination to finally understand".

Chapter Master Adnachiel deplored such accusations, but was supremely confident that the Wings would be exonerated. The intrusive investigation was allowed to proceed with the Chapter welcoming Inquisitor Cathegus into the vast Library of Angels that held all their records. Their engagements were watched over by either by aides of the Inquisitor or brothers of the Disciples of Man, ensuring that the Wings played no role in summoning the daemons.


Take out the comma after "accusations".

If this is helpful, I'll go through the rest later. I know these seem nick-picky, but that's because there are no bigger issues. They're intended to help the final polishing only.
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Maybe change the goddess's name? At the moment, it disrupts the quite worthy story, because the reader is wondering how you pronounce it, every time he reads it.

Perhaps making Ynsoldea into Soldea?

Other than that, very well done, and it was a pleasure to read. This chapter is far from typical in many ways, and was quite interesting. Dark Apostle Thirst will most certainly be looking into the Chaos God that is worshiped by the Wings of Death. ;)

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Thanks for all the comments guys, I'm glad they have been well-recieved. For those who found typos, I will whip myself in punishment - I thought I had found them all!

Maybe change the goddess's name? At the moment, it disrupts the quite worthy story, because the reader is wondering how you pronounce it, every time he reads it.

And Tzeentch doesn't? ^_^ I've always gone with it is pronounced Yin (to rhyme with chin) - sol (to rhyme with lol) - de - a. Alternatively, it could be In -sold -ea, almost like insomnia but I prefer it the first way.

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Maybe change the goddess's name? At the moment, it disrupts the quite worthy story, because the reader is wondering how you pronounce it, every time he reads it.

And Tzeentch doesn't? ^_^ I've always gone with it is pronounced Yin (to rhyme with chin) - sol (to rhyme with lol) - de - a. Alternatively, it could be In -sold -ea, almost like insomnia but I prefer it the first way.

I was thinking Yin-sol-de-a myself.

Tzeentch is one of those things that occurs often enough you kinda get used to it [as aside, I have a proper way of pronouncing Tzeentch in my head, Zehntch (all one syllable), and most dedicated hobbyists have their own notion of how to say it] but seeing as this is a DIY project they aren't going to hear about it from any outside source and are therefore disrupted.

I do think the name is cool, much cooler than many of my own made-up names, but it does break the #1 rule of made up names: make them easy to pronounce.




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