IA: Angels Adamantine (Edited 2-20-2018)

[KBA]

I like how thoroughly formatted your IA is. One thing really took the suspension of disbelief away from me as a reader: having your chapter master be the actual son of the Primarch with the potential cure to the Flaw is way too much, on top of your chapter having an immense amount of terminator armour, and on top of having more tanks than most chapters. Pick one special quirk and run with it, but having three is excessive IMHO.