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I am working on a new inquisitor based on the old man Karamazov model and his awesome throne of orbital bombardment. However, I always have held a thing for the sisters of battle and thus am taking my Inquisitor into that direction.
The good Inquisitor Valeria Mane had always been a determined girl with a desire to help others deal with their own guilt and shame. To this end, she found the ordo hereticus to compliment her own passions. Searching out those who error and allowing them the chance to repent for their sins. Truly, there is no greater sacrifice than to devote yourself so fully to others.
Valeria Mane has taken the title Retenio as a suffix to her name as she travels the galaxy. She has a dedicated group of Sisters Repentia shackled and nameless in their devotion to seek forgiveness for their sins. Wielding huge double handed chainswords, these once proud sisters have a personal burden known only to their Retenio. Only her words can guide these women back to the goodness they forsook. These fearless warriors gathered from years of service are singular in carrying out the will of their Retento. Such is the way to their salvation.
Lastly, the good Inquisitor Mane has also made request of Imperial forces often during her years. A small team of Bullgryn warriors were left in her care once and she has taken to their childlike brilliance with a mothers determination. Each Giant brute is tended as if he were one of her own children. Gathering between battles to listen to stories of the Emperor, or to recite catechisms between the endless lessons they endure. In return these Abhumans have bonded to the Inquisitor in a most fearful way. Using themselves and their huge slabshields, they act as a living wall to protect their "mother" in battle.
Inquisitor Mane has a modified type IV dreadnought system with several unique design features that allow her to bring its full power to bear without the need to inter her forever into its cold metal womb. Alongside her, the list of errors is read on a perpetual scoll as her dearest mentor Dr. Albious Brighton (who originally wielded this amazing beast). The good doctor had chosen to permanently affix himself when a Tyranid invasion took his legs and lower body centuries ago. Inquisitor Mane was responsible for bringing his body safely to Imperial space after that dreadful incident. Last, is the poor Mr Bob. Servitor lobotomized and permanently wired into the weapon systems of the dreadnought. Mr. Bob is always chosen from a very special type of heretic. And is considered to be the purest form of service and repentance. Mr. Bob is truly blessed and should be seen as such despite what he might have been earlier in life.
Heavy multimelta, power claws, chainsword claw hand, heavy flamers in each arm. The Throne of the Repentia is a mighty weapon. Its ancient shields mimic the type used by the loathsome eldar and its stream of information allows to see enemy that would be invisible, hiding or otherwise obscured. The stream of data knows all your sins.
Shes making a list and checking it twice, gonna find out who is naughty or nice....
Edited by airinhere, 10 May 2015 - 05:12 AM.
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Having the scrolls more dynamic would help, as it's unlikely they'd be quite straight especially in a battle but the GS is thin so it should be possible to bend them?
Keep it up, the Inquisition will have a good showing this ETL 
