
And the deadline has been extended to the 11th of September.

I think the problem with this topic (personally) is that either people dont really think about the geenseed after the their chapter goes chaos (you would mostly assume it would stay the same?) but also I dont know... it feels like a topic generally hard to write about. Which by the way means I applaud the current entrants for their strength of will and fortitude. Anyway just my two cents.
The Archangels: Scions of Sanguinious striving for perfection
The Impure: Not even the transhuman physiology of the Space Marines can save you from the zombie plague
The Silent Laughter: The road to damnation is paved with the best intentions
I
Also, for anyone whose warband isn't defined by a specific unique geneseed mutation or isn't a recently turned chapter, it is likely that they have a wide variety of geneseed sources found within them.
My Lord Escharron for instance makes a point of not caring where you came from if you will serve faithfully, even extending such an offer to xenos and other non astartes stock if the situation arrives. (although rarely will they ever achieve much trust)
My Chaos WIP Thread (Bigger Pics and Foul Xenos offsite) Hall of Honour, My Storm Reavers (DIY SM Chapter) Story, My Chaos 7.5 Homebrew Codex Thread
In us burns a fire for vengeance that will only be quenched when we stand triumphant over the smoldering ruins of Terra. Our laughter on that day will haunt their survivors till the end of time. We will stride forth victorious through the shattered gates of their fortress, holding high aloft the defiled corpse of their rotting god as our prize.
Wulfkry, on 02 Jul 2013 - 3:38 PM, said: So an inquisitor is receiving SM implants using GK geneseed stolen off the fields of armageddon interesting..
Captain Semper, on 29 May 2015 - 4:10 AM, said: There is crazy and there is Teetengee crazy...
x9
I'm not dead, and I like 8th better than 7th.
Indeed, it's not something most people think about, nor is it something easy to write about, which is why I chose the subject. To get people thinking about it and to challenge them. Inspire them.I think the problem with this topic (personally) is that either people dont really think about the geenseed after the their chapter goes chaos (you would mostly assume it would stay the same?) but also I dont know... it feels like a topic generally hard to write about. Which by the way means I applaud the current entrants for their strength of will and fortitude. Anyway just my two cents.
Also, for anyone whose warband isn't defined by a specific unique geneseed mutation or isn't a recently turned chapter, it is likely that they have a wide variety of geneseed sources found within them.
My entry for "gene-seed."
I hope you like it.
Edited by Warsmith Aznable, 09 September 2015 - 07:58 AM.
Mab and the Harvesters
Edited by Teetengee, 10 September 2015 - 07:56 PM.
My Chaos WIP Thread (Bigger Pics and Foul Xenos offsite) Hall of Honour, My Storm Reavers (DIY SM Chapter) Story, My Chaos 7.5 Homebrew Codex Thread
In us burns a fire for vengeance that will only be quenched when we stand triumphant over the smoldering ruins of Terra. Our laughter on that day will haunt their survivors till the end of time. We will stride forth victorious through the shattered gates of their fortress, holding high aloft the defiled corpse of their rotting god as our prize.
Wulfkry, on 02 Jul 2013 - 3:38 PM, said: So an inquisitor is receiving SM implants using GK geneseed stolen off the fields of armageddon interesting..
Captain Semper, on 29 May 2015 - 4:10 AM, said: There is crazy and there is Teetengee crazy...
x9
I'm not dead, and I like 8th better than 7th.
This week’s topic wasn’t the easiest, and asked you to think about what makes your marines tick. Biologically speaking. I thank those who entered for their work.
We had Teetengee with Mab and the Harvesters: non-Astartes who scavenge and salvage what they can from the battlefield, be it materiel or meat. I loved the description of one machine essentially eating a near-dead marine, spitting the unneeded gore out its rear.
Thedarkprincesnun told us of Rebirth: Alkov and his geneslaves working for the Blight Angels.
Carrack gave us a wonderful piece: Returned, gene-thralls returning recovered progenid glands to the Black Maw’s eerie storage alcoves.
It was very difficult to choose a winner this week but...
...step forth Warsmith Aznable and claim your reward!
You gave us a tale of an apothecary investigating a fallen enemy and stealing their geneseed. The apothecary’s cataloging of the enemy’s wounds and subsequent dissection was very good. I particularly liked the apothecary talking to himself as he performed his duty.
And here begins the next challenge...
Actually, no it doesn’t.
That will be given by Carrack, as I will be too busy to run IF for the next few weeks (I hope I can squeeze enough time to take part though!). I’ll be back from the 2nd of October.
It was very difficult to choose a winner this week but...
...step forth Warsmith Aznable and claim your reward!
I claim that reward!
You gave us a tale of an apothecary investigating a fallen enemy and stealing their geneseed. The apothecary’s cataloging of the enemy’s wounds and subsequent dissection was very good. I particularly liked the apothecary talking to himself as he performed his duty.
This was a challenging task, because I wanted to write it as a narrative and not factually talk about what the warband does. Narrative-wise I'm not sure I got in everything I wanted to, particularly the motivation.
The 49th Grand Company does not just steal any old geneseed. They consider that they are honouring worthy enemies by adopting their geneseed into the warband. The apothecary assigned to collect enemy geneseed is also evaluating the context of that enemy's death. An ignominious or simply unremarkable death, in the apothecary's opinion, will cause that apothecary to leave the geneseed in place and move on. If he decides to collect the geneseed he collects evidence to build a case for his opinion.
The advisors, a position roughly analogous to chaplains, review all combat footage and conduct after action reviews (AAR) with the squads they are assigned to. The special advisor who oversees enemy geneseed matches those reports of an enemy's pre-death behavior with the apothecary's post-mortem evaluation. If the advisor decides that all the evidence matches then he sends his approval to the apothecarion, and the geneseed is entered into the warband's stores and the name of that enemy is remembered in various ways. If the advisor decides that any part of the case is not satisfactory then the geneseed is unceremoniously binned.
It's not traditionally grimdark, I admit. Having been in the military I cannot help but want to incorporate the drudgery, routine, and absurdity of soldiering that never makes it into war movies. Of course I want that to be interesting, too, so I covet the approval of these Chaos icons like a strung out junkie...
Edited by Thedarkprincesnun, 11 September 2015 - 07:21 PM.
anyone mind if I write it about a game my friends played when I was first teaching them to play rather than one of my own games?
a tzeentch sorc took out the avatar of khaine in close combat and then ascended to daemonhood, so I figured I can't really top that.
My Chaos WIP Thread (Bigger Pics and Foul Xenos offsite) Hall of Honour, My Storm Reavers (DIY SM Chapter) Story, My Chaos 7.5 Homebrew Codex Thread
In us burns a fire for vengeance that will only be quenched when we stand triumphant over the smoldering ruins of Terra. Our laughter on that day will haunt their survivors till the end of time. We will stride forth victorious through the shattered gates of their fortress, holding high aloft the defiled corpse of their rotting god as our prize.
Wulfkry, on 02 Jul 2013 - 3:38 PM, said: So an inquisitor is receiving SM implants using GK geneseed stolen off the fields of armageddon interesting..
Captain Semper, on 29 May 2015 - 4:10 AM, said: There is crazy and there is Teetengee crazy...
x9
I'm not dead, and I like 8th better than 7th.
anyone mind if I write it about a game my friends played when I was first teaching them to play rather than one of my own games?
a tzeentch sorc took out the avatar of khaine in close combat and then ascended to daemonhood, so I figured I can't really top that.
Cato Sicarius surveyed the battlefield, a puzzled expression upon his face. Arrayed against him were the forces of the Impure, but something didnt seem right. Even though the opposing force that was arrayed against him certainly looked sinister, it didnt seem to have what his scouts had assured him were their. Both he daemon engines he had been warned so strongly about, and the Warbands leader seemed to be missing. It troubled him, but the Ultramarine 2nd company captain had no more time for such troubles. "We March for Macragge" Sicarius yelled. "And we shall NO KNOW FEAR" His assembled strike force returned. They advanced slowly keeping to cover where possible, and making sure to stay out of range of the Archenemies weapons. Even so the hellbrute that stood so defiantly on a rock overlooking the battle managed to kill 2 battle brothers in one of his tactical squads. The twin-linked Autocannon on its arm shredding the two marines armour and flesh. Undeterred the strike force continued forwards. Cato called the order to his devastators and they took aim at the hellbrute. The beast suffered a multitude of hits but shrugged most of them off. 1 shot got through and blew its Reaper Autocannon off. The hellbrute looked confused and then, to everyone horror, regrew the arm. Deciding enough was enough Cato order his two dreadnoughts out of reserve. The ironclad and venerable dreadnuaghts landed and again aimed at the roaring hellbrute. This time the fiend vanished in a cloud of toxic miasma and flames.
The Ultramarines celebrated and charged up the ridge the hellbrute had been guarding. At the top they began trading fire with the traitor forces milling around. A squad of deathguard chortled wetly, as bullets sunk into their clammy and bloated flesh without leaving so much as a scratch. The tactical squad that was missing two brothers was wiped out under the combined fire of the Deathguard and a cadre of Thousand Sons. In retaliation Sicarius ordered his snipers to target the sorcerer leading the Rubricae. The first two shots hit the ground before going anywhere near the sorcerer, stopped completely by his Kine shield. He began to laugh, but stopped as a bullet hit him in the shoulder. He quickly ran to cover, but as his concentration wavered the rubricae slowed down their shooting and then stopped, The sorcerer regained his concentration but not quickly enough to stop the devastator squad from pulping them into brittle dust with two direct Frag missiles.
It was at this point that Pestilentae made his presence known. Appearing from deepstrike wreathed in a cloud of plague flies, and protected by his guards, the Niterai. They proceeded to cut down the devastator squad. In retaliation the two dreadnuaghts opened fire on the group and killed all but pestilentae himself. The clouds of flies moving to absorb any incoming fire. It was at this point that Sicarius' fears were realised. With an unholy roar a Forgefiend appeared from the mists that had been cloaking the edges of the battlefield. It spewed unholy ectopasma onto the Ironclad which disintegrated into a pool of molten slag. Cato heard a nearby roar. Barrelling towards him faster than he could quite comprehend was the dread warlord of the Impure. Cato realised that the sorcerer was somehow boosting the Terminator Lord's movement speed. The sniper scouts saw the sorcerer and again levelled a volley at him. All five shots pierced the Sorceress body, making him fly backwards by a few feet from the heavy calibre rifles. Pestilentae slowed down but bellowed a challenge. The company champion who served in Cato's honour guard replied with a challenge of his own. The noble champion charged forwards, before being cut in half by the giant scythe Pesitlentae, like his master Typhus, relished wielding. As the champion fell to the ground with two wet thunks, Pestilentae's scythe, Corpse Reaper, glowed and grew larger, a crackling aura surrounding it.
Cato Sighed and drew his sword. He would not let the rest of his honour guard die, for surely none could match the Chaos Lord in combat. "Feel the wrath of Guilliman" Sicarius roared before charging at Pestilentae. The charge caught the terminator lord of balance and like the skilled swordsman he was Cato capitalised on the moment slashing rapidly before stabbing forwards at the traitor and landing a telling blow that would have felled an Ultramarine Terminator. Pestilantae grimaced and then began laugh. He started his own attack, a blistering combination of overhead and sideways sweeps with his scythe, even using the blunt end to try and concuss the captain. Two hits landed and cut into his flesh through the armour. Both areas became cold and numb, and Cato looked in worry at how discoloured they became after such a short time. He barely had time to register this as Pestilentae was once again on the offensive. The Lord jumped into the air and brought down his weapon with all his might, hitting nothing but air as Sicarius rolled to the side. As Sicarius was about to strike he again heard the Chaos lord laugh, in confusion he looked down and saw a line of red across his entire stomach. He could no longer feel his arms or his legs. He fell to his knees and struggled to rise. The last thing he saw was the Anthraxis Kiss, an ornate yet filthy master crafted combi bolter being pinted at his head. Then he saw no more.
-Edit
I feel like this is both too long, and too short. GOD DAMMIT TZEENTCH JUST COZ I DIDN'T WRITE ABOUT YOU!
Edited by EesiOh, 14 September 2015 - 08:53 AM.
The Archangels: Scions of Sanguinious striving for perfection
The Impure: Not even the transhuman physiology of the Space Marines can save you from the zombie plague
The Silent Laughter: The road to damnation is paved with the best intentions
I
This is based on a campaign me and my brother played a while back, the Austik Vien Relic campaign. In the last battle we played (the campaign has been on hold since as we've both been busy with work), my traitor guard, the Nihilists, were allied with a small detachment of Siege Makers, led by Robersium the Pyromancer to face his Necrons. The following entry is based upon that battle.
Robersium felt the Warp course through his veins, but this time it came only from his flanks. Arrayed before the forces of Chaos were the ancient Necrons, who seemed to be able to dampen the Warp around them. Or at least this was as it seemed to the Sorceror. Whizzing shots of lasfire headed in the machines' direction, a few scoring fatal shots but many got back up, emerald energy lighting up their chests as they stood back up. The battle for this level had only just truly begun, with the Leman Russ BattleTank, the Spoils of Victory, rumbling to Robersium's right. In his ear, the vox-channel came on.
+The Dorn Breaker reporting, my liege,+ came the crisp sound over the din of the battle. +We shall be joining you soon. ETA three minutes.+
"Acknowledged," replied the Pyromancer. "We await your inclusion and we shall show who truly owns this battlefield. Out." As Robersium looked to the Battle Tank again, he could make out Skrinen and his Chosen squad taking up position in an old tower, reduced to ruin from Gauss fire. At ground level, a squad of Nihilist veterans, known as Darmen's Reavers, began to use their superior weapons (at least in comparision to the majority of the Nihilists) to shoot the advancing Necrons.
"We need to get moving," said Vornt, Champion of the Iron Death squad. "Scanners show Necron forces are gaining ground rapidly..." The Battle Cannon on the Spoils drowned all noise in the immediate vicinity as it fired, along with the bark of Bother Brosius's Heavy Bolter from the tower. At the same time, The Dorn Breaker trundled in from behind, it's ancient scarred hull a sight of awe to the Traitor Marines.
"Agreed," replied the Sorceror. He clicked the comm-rune in his ear, opening up a channel to the various squad Champions on the field. "I want a clean order of battle. Target priority goes to the more elaborate looking ones or any that hold a staff or orb. If any have a robe of any description, abolutely all firepower must be directed at them. Am I understood?" A series of yeses came back, just as the Iron Dragon, General Kryten, joined Robersium. "Let us march to victory."
Barely two minutes had passed before the first Siege Maker casualties were reported. Soren and his Raptors had broken from the battle line and charged into combat with a squad of Warriors. Yelling blessings to the Blood God, he had then cleaved the Lord in two as the rest of the squad cut the survivors down as they attempted to retreat. But this victory was short lived, as the squad came under fire from the most decorated of Necrons on the field.
+Retreating to fall back zone my liege,+ reported Soren. +Casualties at seventy percent. We have dispatched the centre most Necrons.+ Frustration came over Robersium, but he was no fool.
"Acknowledged." To Robersium's left, mortal followers of the Blood God broke from cover, having been ordered to by Kryten, and fired a well disciplined series of shots into the nearby squad of Warriors. The ones immediately to the front went down, their metallic bodies pierced and scorched from the concentration of fire. Robersium and the Iron Death squad picked up their pace, rounding the corner of a large chapel. Immediately they opened fire upon the same Warrior squad as the Khorne worshipping mortals. Bolter rounds tore into their hides, severing limbs and spinal columns. The Sorceror drew in what power he could and released an inferno within one of them, melting the ancient being into slag.
"CHARGE!" bellowed Vornt, the Iron Warriors under his command sprinting to engage their target. Using Warp spawned fire to pave the way, Robersium charged his Force Sword, channeling unnatural heat into the blade. He slashed the head from the Orb wielding Lord, whose body fell to the ground motionless. It appeared to just fade from existence however, and the squad it had led soon faded too. The group of Iron Warriors quickly reformed, but another surprise was soon to be theirs.
The cybernetic Sentinel Kenial, who had been marking targets from afar as the left flank had advanced, exploded as a powerful blast hit him. His legs were blown from underneath him, while some unknown power opened the ground up beneath him and crushed him as he fell. The shooter, the most decorated and robed machine in the area, had been identified as the Overlord, and those around him were classed as his Royal Court of Crypteks. They then turned their attention to the Iron Warriors, but the Khorne Infantry squad retaliated first. Bursts from their lasguns hit home, but none scored a hit due to unseen shields. This proved fatal as the response virtually wiped the squad from existence, the Royal Court combining fire with rapidly moving Tomb Blades.
Robersium was becoming more enraged. At least the Blood God worshippers had brought the Iron Death time, which the Sorceror immediately capitalised on. Swinging his sword in a downward arc, the blade made contact and the sheer heat from it cleaved straight through. However, the self repair mechanisms in the Overlord repaired it immediately. Knowing their time wasn't now, and as more of the Royal Court was cut down, the remainder of the machines fell back.
Panting heavily, the Pyromancer saw that Vornt was unconscious. Taking stock of the situation, he ordered the Iron Warriors to regroup on him. He took satisfaction as he saw Brosius's Heavy Bolter sever the Overlord's head with a shell from the ancient weapon. All around the field he saw the Nihilists were slowly gaining the upperhand, but not without heavy casualties. The Spoils of Victory fired at the darting Tomb Blades, and managed to destroy them along with a volley from some vengeance fuelled Nurgle mortal followers. Reports of the Blessed Brethren's demise were confirmed, so much for being the most favoured among the Nihilists. But Robersium began to feel a chill, despite his powers. Then he realised what was about to happen.
He turned just in time to protect himself with an outward fiery blast as the rest of the Iron Death were blown back. A C'tan Shard, clearly from the ancient Nightbringer, had entered, and was attempting to turn the tide of battle. A Canoptek Spyder was at it's side, and had a prism beneath that sucked the powers of the Warp from those around it. Knowing he was the only being able to do something, the traitorous Crusader of Guilliman charged. A swing from a massive scythe cracked into his side, buckling his armour. Another swing hefted him off his feet but he didn't break his stride. He managed to reach the beast and drove his sword into the epidermis. Concentrating his Warp based powers, he channeled his powers and saw the ancient body begin to crack. The creature let out a scream as it's body exploded, knocking Robersium back and also damaging the Spyder.
Dragging himself up, the Sorceror saw the prism was broken, and he felt his powers reach peak levels. But he also felt drained. Activating his sword one last time, he severed the head from the ancient machine. Slumping to the ground, he heard Skrinen over the vox-channel.
+The field is ours, brother. No Necrons are in sight. Victory is ours.+
And a link to the actual campaign as it stands at the moment: http://www.bolterand...ic#entry3588794
Force and Flame
Edited by Teetengee, 15 September 2015 - 12:45 PM.
My Chaos WIP Thread (Bigger Pics and Foul Xenos offsite) Hall of Honour, My Storm Reavers (DIY SM Chapter) Story, My Chaos 7.5 Homebrew Codex Thread
In us burns a fire for vengeance that will only be quenched when we stand triumphant over the smoldering ruins of Terra. Our laughter on that day will haunt their survivors till the end of time. We will stride forth victorious through the shattered gates of their fortress, holding high aloft the defiled corpse of their rotting god as our prize.
Wulfkry, on 02 Jul 2013 - 3:38 PM, said: So an inquisitor is receiving SM implants using GK geneseed stolen off the fields of armageddon interesting..
Captain Semper, on 29 May 2015 - 4:10 AM, said: There is crazy and there is Teetengee crazy...
x9
I'm not dead, and I like 8th better than 7th.
Edited by Carrack, 17 September 2015 - 04:30 AM.
god dammit carrak could you submit something bad please? other people wouldn't mind winning for once
The Archangels: Scions of Sanguinious striving for perfection
The Impure: Not even the transhuman physiology of the Space Marines can save you from the zombie plague
The Silent Laughter: The road to damnation is paved with the best intentions
I
I don't know if this is too late or not:
Not sure I'm happy with the ending, but I'm out of time to tweak it.
Edited by Carrack, 24 September 2015 - 04:09 AM.
I feel that if you had not been judging the competition, Carrack, that you should have won it for your short about the Rhino.
But as that is not the case, I gladly claim this prize!
Edited by Beachymike123, 18 September 2015 - 09:15 PM.
I feel that if you had not been judging the competition, Carrack, that you should have won it for your short about the Rhino.
But as that is not the case, I gladly claim this prize!
Well done Warsmith Aznable. The way the flashbacks were played out worked well, and I think added to a warrior recounting his tale. Great work all round though, I certainly had a blast reading through them.
Now to start thinking what items my guys have for the next IF topic.
Just out of curiosity Carrack, is it just one relic or can we have multiple? Obviously not a cave's worth, but say 2 or 3?
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