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#1976
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The Scions Hospitaliers have passed inspection. All that remains for rule sheets is Hennasohn and Morro. Then, we will verify fluff paragraphs and banners for the faction crunch before we will have passed Delta Phase.


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Given the recent chatter, here is a list of the missing banners and fluff so far:

 

  • Quote for the Iron Bears' first crunch page
  • RoW fluff for both IB RoWs
  • Banner for the Warborn
  • Banner for the Land Raider Mauler really could use some fluff other than a description of weapon systems
  • Ghost Walkers Banner
  • All the GS Banners, minus the quote banners, could use improvement (Reapers done)
  • Praeligation Powers need fluff
  • Quote Banner for Drowned's first crunch page
  • Mole Mortar description?
  • Drowned Legion Relic fluff paragraph
  • Drowned RoW fluff
  • Pelagic Monarch Banner
  • Malacost Hazard Squad Banner
  • Equerry Boraeo Banner
  • Hennasohn Banner
  • Morro Banner Quote
  • Morro Fluff Paragarph
  • Morro gear and rules all need fluff paragraphs
  • Wave Blade fluff paragraph?
  • Scion RoW fluff paragraphs
  • Diomes Banner

 

I do not consider this list exhaustive, fully expecting some to slip through the gaps. Some of the gear is question marked because whether or not some gear gets a fluff paragraph is somewhat arbitrary. Mainly if the gear's name is more than enough for a description or not. 


Edited by simison, 11 November 2018 - 04:22 PM.

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#1978
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I have quotes, let me find them

#1979
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Don't you mean Grave Stalkers instead of Ghost Walkers?
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Don't you mean Grave Stalkers instead of
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Don't you mean Grave Stalkers instead of Ghost Walkers?

 

Nope, the Ghost Walkers are a unit for the Iron Bears now. 


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Also there's a Hesh-written banner for the Pelagic Monarchs and some of Morro's wargear fluff by Blunt on page 18 of the Drowned thread.

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I should have Morrow's whole profile covered

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“Nowhere is the union of flesh and metal so perfectly achieved as it is in the armies of Tricendia. The Iron Bears do not shackle their hearts with machine directives, but take the strength of iron and wield it with unmatched surety. We have taken our place among their Wartribes, and I would go to the ends of the Galaxy if they asked it of me.”
Lord Marshal Lokir Paesun of the 3rd Hahmpin Armoured Division
 
They have taken the Ngauruk Causeway and broken Scorn’s Gate. First Armoured is gone, Infantry Second through Eighth are gone. Stars’ end, nothing withstands them. Our super-heavies are no match, their striding-machines alone make cinders of our divisions. 
 
  Our gene-hulks have been cut down. The enemy are their match in strength and so fast, fast. We haven't even managed to slow them. They strike and we unravel.
 
  We are undone. Our arsenals are spent. Urge our soldiers, throw down their guns. To resist and invite further ruin is the greater treason - beg their mercy. Nothing is left to us.”
  General Rhuj Lanur of the Olst Brigades during the VIth Legion’s Compliance action

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Also there's a Hesh-written banner for the Pelagic Monarchs and some of Morro's wargear fluff by Blunt on page 18 of the Drowned thread.

 

Got the Monarchs banner, will grab the rest later.


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Hesh's fluff for the Darkest before Dawn RoW

When the Drowned take to battle, they became renowned for taking to battle in a manner that allowed everything to strike at the same time, utilising heavy artillery barrages and orbital strikes to cut off enemy reinforcements along with Incendiary barrages, Line of Sight blocking smoke attacks, while grouping up to take out singular threats, while heavy infantry like Breacher designated squads or Tactical Dreadnought Armour equipped units would teleport in to distract others from assisting the chosen quarry. As the battle unfolded, enemy strongpoint after strongpoint would gradually fall as they were isolated and dismembered with a clinical brutality.

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Also I've now added the MalacostHazatd Squad fluff banner in the Drowned thread.

Rewritten Rimeshatter (legion relic) fluff added.

While I don't think there's a banner quote for Morro in the Drowned thread (feel free to correct me here Blunt) there's one that may be suitable at the bottom of their wiki page if Helter agrees.

There's a quote on page 3 of the Drowned thread and at the top of their wiki page which may be suitable for them.

Edited by Beren, 29 October 2018 - 09:01 PM.


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While I don't think there's a banner quote for Morro in the Drowned thread (feel free to correct me here Blunt) there's one that may be suitable at the bottom of their wiki page if Helter agrees.

There's a quote on page 3 of the Drowned thread and at the top of their wiki page which may be suitable for them.

 

Helter, do these quotes meet your approval?


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There isn't a Morro one to my knowledge

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“Nowhere is the union of flesh and metal so perfectly achieved as it is in the armies of Tricendia. The Iron Bears do not shackle their hearts with machine directives, but take the strength of iron and wield it with unmatched surety. We have taken our place among their Wartribes, and I would go to the ends of the Galaxy if they asked it of me.”
Lord Marshal Lokir Paesun of the 3rd Hahmpin Armoured Division
 
They have taken the Ngauruk Causeway and broken Scorn’s Gate. First Armoured is gone, Infantry Second through Eighth are gone. Stars’ end, nothing withstands them. Our super-heavies are no match, their striding-machines alone make cinders of our divisions. 
 
  Our gene-hulks have been cut down. The enemy are their match in strength and so fast, fast. We haven't even managed to slow them. They strike and we unravel.
 
  We are undone. Our arsenals are spent. Urge our soldiers, throw down their guns. To resist and invite further ruin is the greater treason - beg their mercy. Nothing is left to us.”
  General Rhuj Lanur of the Olst Brigades during the VIth Legion’s Compliance action

 

 

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And I just spotted a mistake. "Fast, so fast".





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