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Signs and Portents

Part 1.1

The Eye Will Blink

Aspis, sub-sector seat
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Ready

Calimyr, Aspis sub-sector
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Right and Proper

Morber, Aspis sub-sector
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Judgment's End

Excerpt from the Narrative Section (Section C) of incident report 16-888-G46
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The Triple Spear

Pillars of Fortitude
2.1

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The Silent Approach

Pillars of Fortitude

Part 2.2

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The Martyrdom of Captain Valedor
Part 2.3
Tancrea, The Pillars of Fortitude

Where There's Smoke, There's Fire
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Red Smile

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The Severity of the Situation

Part 1.2
Aspis, Sub-Sector Seat
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Horror
Part 2.4
Tancrea, The Pillars of Fortitude

Apologies for the length.
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The Martyrdom of Captain Valedor
Part 2.5
Tancrea, Pillars of Fortitude

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Author Notes
This story is intended to tell the tale of the Black Maw Warband's invasion of the Aspis sub-sector. It will be a collection of narrative stories, reports, and maybe even limericks. No, there will be no limericks. It will be grim, and it will be dark.

Here is how I'm going to organize my posts. I will post them in chronological order as much as possible, but for organizational purposes, will number them according to setting.

Part 1.0- will take place predominantly on Aspis, sub-sector seat. It will also include stories that effect the entire sub.

Part 2.0- will take place on Tancrea, the so called Pillars of Fortitude.

Part 3.0- will take part in the agri-world of Calimyr

Venicus 4.0-will take place in the Admech shipyards of Venicus IX, and it's system

Chellah System 5.0-mining system

More to follow. I will edit in additional settings.


I Love feedback of all kinds, and I have a thick skin, so don't be afraid to criticize.

Previous campaigns of the Black Maw can be found here

The Doom of Red Siliquastrum
http://www.bolterand...m/#entry4062505

The Assault on Calebra Hive
http://www.bolterand...-4#entry4223736

The Wanderer
http://www.bolterand...r/#entry4309605

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Fires of Calimyr
Part 3.0
Calimyr
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Fits of Revenge

Part 3.1
Calimyr, agri-world

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Time for a little grim, dark, future.
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Words
Part 3.2
Calimyr orbit

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The Descent and Climb of Ramone
Part 2.6
Pillars of Fortitude


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High Road 27
Part 2.7
Pillars of Fortitude
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COME ON RAMOOONE COME ON! COME ON RAMOOONE COME ON!


One unauthorised psyker in this underhive? BURN THE SYSTEM AND CLEAN THE TAINT!!!!

 

The Archangels, searching for the lost artifact of the Grail Wardens, and their own salvation http://www.bolterand...431-archangels/

The Blood Wing and The Bloody Harvest. Sanguinious' less noble legacy http://www.bolterand...loody-harvest/ 

 

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COME ON RAMOOONE COME ON! COME ON RAMOOONE COME ON!

Ha ha, I like the character as well, I still might kill him off though, maybe :) But to drag out the suspense of the Battle for High Road 27, I'll go to another world in the Aspis sub-sector, and revisit some old friends there.

The Scream of the Beast
Part 4.0
Venicus System
Home to the Shipyards of Venicus IX


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Edit: Roman Numerals are confusing me.

Edited by Carrack, 11 March 2016 - 11:02 PM.

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Venicus Shipyards

Part 4.1
Venicus Shipyards

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Edited by Carrack, 14 March 2016 - 12:21 AM.

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Sealing the Covenant

Part 2.8
Pillars of Fortitude, High Road 27
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Coming along well carrack. Especially enjoyed the emphasemic preacher, the ship docks, and the latest post. Very good.

 


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Coming along well carrack. Especially enjoyed the emphasemic preacher, the ship docks, and the latest post. Very good.

Thanks. I'm digging the freedom this story is allowing me to write, there are so many opportunities. The scale is a little daunting though. Maybe I'll need to commit Exterminatus on a few worlds to bring it down to manageable levels. :)

I'm enjoying Kraits Divergent as well. The background is very rich, and Esrah is still one of my favorites.

Make Them Burn
Part 5.0

Chellah System, mining system
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Edited by Carrack, 15 March 2016 - 11:22 AM.

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Thrones
Part 1.3
Calimyr System and Aspis, sub-sector seat

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Not One Step Back
Part 6.0
City of Hammish, Imperial World of Lemish II, Lemish System

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Edited by Carrack, 19 March 2016 - 11:49 AM.

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Leaving the High Road
Part 2.9
Defense Sector 27, Pillars of Fortitude
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The Hunt
Part 5.1
Chellah System, mining system

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Author Note.
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It works.

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Is good.


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It works.

Hidden Content

Is good.

Most of Keeper's story has been Inspirational Friday entries on the CSM board. You should give them a try, they are fun. For completion, I will include the tale of Keeper from beginning to end. Or is it the end... ;)


Returned

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Keeper
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On the moon of Odeanta
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The first part takes place after the Doom of Magurn, and the second part sometime later.


The Path to Power
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This is part two of my possessed story, where the thinblooded Keeper decides to allow a possessing daemon to share his body in a grasp for power. I couldn't finish it in time for last week, but wanted to add it in anyway, consider it out of competition.


A walk in Man-Skin

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