so i decided to look into the article itself that I keep on my google drive and found this:
Magister Nebnefer’s legionnary past has been lost to the warp and become irrelevant after ten thousand years of inactivity at his father’s side. What he is is a master of a burgeoning Thrallband and an expert of Daemon Mancipium. He has become so good at this that he has even successfully entrapped mutated Thralls, once brothers of his, into transport vehicles and tanks to do his bidding on the field of battle.
He is the visionary that has led these inactive souls free of uncaring fathers, selfish brothers and life taking bureaucracy.
Psamtic Tosertosis[Na’ardisha’an’ah, Maulerfiend Pattern Daemon Engine]
Thrall Tosertosis was a student of Okpara Nebnefer’s back on Prospero and has been as close as his shadow ever since. The psyker has learned all the magister knows concerning Daemon Mancipium which he pair to his own considerable precognitive powers. This fact and the relationship he holds with Nebnefer allows many to associate both men to the old Corvidae Cult, although neither associates with it or attaches any importance to that designation.
Na’ardisha’an’ah(shortened to Na) is a daemon of slaanesh trapped within the confines of a maulerfiend pattern daemon engine. She was known to many as the Final Satisfaction, the Eternal Sigh and the Many Tongued Desire, amongst many other names of hatred and worship. Tosertosis summoned her on Sortiarius under the tutelage of his master. Nebnefer had suggested a daemon of slaanesh as, he explained, they were as easy to manipulate as daemons of Khorne but posed less of a risk to their bodies and material possessions. The Eternal Sigh now whispers inumerable pleasures to her targets but saves the most violent and obscene for Thrall Tosertosis’ own ears, promises of what she will do to him in this world and the next should she ever escape his grasp.
Ishaq Zahur[Anos’hiru’ivanalak, Maulerfiend Pattern Daemon Engine]
Ishaq Zahur is a proud member of the Pavoni Cult. His affection for the old cult is so great that he takes a personal offense to any who do not mention him as “of the Pavoni” when introducing him. His mastery of the biological is seen on the battlefield as he assists Thrall Tosertosis with the enhancement of the daemon engines employed by the Thrallband. Off the field of battle, Thrall Zahur is the man of many faces, using his powers to modify his skeletal structure and appearance to take on any personality or appearance he so chooses. He does this with such ease that no Thousand Son could identify his original facial features even if he ever let them see it.
Anos’hiru’ivanalak(shortened to Anos) is a daemon of Khorne residing in a maulerfiend pattern daemon engine. Unlike his Slaaneshi counterpart, Anos is quite pleased to be spilling blood for the blood god in this new form and only seeks his grand reward from his god whenever he is freed to go before him and the skull throne.
Nassot Sutekh[4 Scarab Occult Terminators]
Nassot Sutekh is first among Thrallband Tusmah’s aspirants and the only Thousand Son among them. When Nebnefer, Tosertosis and Zahur were making their dash for a brighter future, Sutekh volunteered himself and the rubrics in his command. Not a grand psyker or schemer, he remains first among aspirants as the one to show newly acquired sorcerers how to command the rubrics. He keeps the Scarab Occult to himself as they are both precious and valuable. Precious as he knew them well before the rubric, valuable as only he knows their names and thus only he can use these weapons against his foes.
Najja Harimotep[9 Rubricae]
Mensah Rasebek[9 Rubricae]
Vispa'th’a'urvo'ashta’i, Herald of Tzeentch and her Legion of Horrors
Vispa'th’a'urvo'ashta’i(shortened to Vispa) is a daemon of Tzeentch very close to Magister Nebnefer. Having been his tutelary on Prosopero, Vispa has been present at every major event of Nebnefer’s career. Although no longer as close an ally as when she was his tutelary, she still remains close to him as an aid and an advisor. Vispa speaks on behalf of the changer of ways in the hopes of keeping the Thrallband in his good graces and positioning herself for ideal moves in the great game that he watches and plays. Although not currently a concern, Vispa’s true name is known to the Magister only, making her currently his underling but having been an asset in the past, he allows her to operate freely out of a daemon engine. A fate he often reminds her of should she fail him.
Question for you guys:
First and foremost: Thoughts?
Secondly, I'm thinking of renaming my two other aspirants and making them non-TS. Would any of you have Space Marine Chapters to suggest to take these "renegades" from? That would help with the naming as I would theme their names based on the Chapter they used to belong to.
Edited by Dolchiate Remembrancer, 06 December 2018 - 05:40 PM.