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The Return of the Lion: Part I


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Dayyyyyyyyyyummm what a twist. What does this mean for the "Unforgiven"? Can't wait to find out


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I can't wait to find out also mate teehee.gif.


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Well done Brotheryes.gif


Edited by Brother Lunkhead, 05 March 2019 - 09:45 PM.

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Greetings my fellow Banner-kindred, I wish to announce that I am currently formulating a story for the next segment of the Lion's dream-chronicle, except... the Lion has already awoken, so what will happen next is not a dream.

 

Also, I went back and edited the last segment, made it smoother and added more action scenes (the paragraph in red); just gives more life to that segment.

 

Now, I cannot say when the next segment will come out, I have not even began typing yet, just having ideas in my head.  So, if you guys are dying biggrin.png to read what happens next biggrin.png, you are better off grabbing Solar War - which comes out in May - to sate your appetite. 

 

As always, thank you for reading my story.


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Agreed, the action scene breathes a bit more life into the piece.

 

Looking forward to what you come up with next


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Ditto here! PLEASE LET IT COME SOON! Manchu warlord!


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Hello fellas,

 

 

Agreed, the action scene breathes a bit more life into the piece.

 

Looking forward to what you come up with next

 

I actually went back to re-read the red-sections, as well as other parts of my writing, and boy!  I do have quite a few grammar mistakes ohmy.png, and I tend to miss-out words in a sentence teehee.gif.  I shall atone for my failings for this set of skills.

 

 

Ditto here! PLEASE LET IT COME SOON! Manchu warlord!

 

Dear The Vanquisher, your loyalty to my fan fiction never cease to inspire me. 

*Pats The Vanquisher on the shoulder*

Fear not, I am working on the next segment as we speak.  Though, it is quite challenging, and will take time......  

 

I rest my case for now.


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That is great! I am most looking forward to its arrival, Manchu Warlord   :)


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