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Awesome !


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Damn they kept this quiet eh! Got something to look forward to when the kids get picked up!

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Impressive, with some improvements it would be even cooler.

 

Nice job.



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Nice surprise of the day. I enjoyed it a lot.

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It was good, even though I could barely understand them at times.
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Hmmm yes, the voice actors could be a bit better...


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"You sly dog! You got me monologuing!"
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Room for improvement but pretty dang cool!
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Not a fan of the end but its pretty good.

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This looks good, but the voice acting really lets it down.  I've been thinking that a big part of why Astartes gets so much credit for getting the 40k "feel" correct comes down to the lack of dialogue, where it basically just dodges that entire minefield.  Soooo many things falter on this issue, including GW's own stuff.  And in a way, a lot of 40k is a silent place for us.  We see it in miniatures and artwork that do not speak.

 

Not to take away credit from the amount of work that went into this, and it looks awesome. 


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Well done  Brother!   I enjoyed it immenesly.     jawdrop.gif thumbsup.gif yes.gif


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Lighting, texturing and models were astounding.
Animation and audio normalization could use a tweak, but a great production nonetheless.
Hope to see more in the future!
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This looks good, but the voice acting really lets it down.  I've been thinking that a big part of why Astartes gets so much credit for getting the 40k "feel" correct comes down to the lack of dialogue, where it basically just dodges that entire minefield.  Soooo many things falter on this issue, including GW's own stuff.  And in a way, a lot of 40k is a silent place for us.  We see it in miniatures and artwork that do not speak.
 
Not to take away credit from the amount of work that went into this, and it looks awesome.


Mabye keep it to good one liners like "even in death I still serve" etc if its a combat thing. All the talky bits need more of a focous at the begining/ setup if they need to be there, not mid fight like Star Wars etc. Or a third person narrator that does setup like in TW Warhammer.
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Not bad.

 

The second fight was pretty nice!


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....it’s....ok.

The dialogue is a little forced and cliche. The actions of the BT in particular are odd. The Emperors Champion kneeling still while a brother dies is very odd. He’d have engaged within moments.
It feels like a classic mistake of giving in to allow monologuing to justify what’s happening. There’s no need for it. The brutality of Astartes is down played for “character”. Of which sadly... there’s little.

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Hmmmm not really a fan this unfortunately, I won’t berate it though as it’s someone’s passion project
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It looks really good and the sound is great too. 


Edited by grailkeeper, 19 October 2020 - 09:11 PM.

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Is easy to knock something. I really enjoyed this and hope to see more. It’s nice to see the good guys win once in awhile.


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As a Templar player I was very impressed. I hope he does more and hones his skills.
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Good, but not as good as Astartes, too much cheesy voices and stiff conversations, the combat scenes are nowere near as plausible as the ones in Astartes. The background music is too loud and takes too much space. Good background music is the type that enhances the mood/atmosphere but doesn't really make you aware of it.



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I don't think people need to say its not as good as Astartes. You wouldn't like if you posted a model you painted here and somebody replied "Well it's not as good as this frater's"


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I must say that like it or not, Astartes will be the measurement that all 40K films/animations will be compared to. It is inevitable because they set the bar very high.
That said I share BCC opinion. It is not a bad movie but it has that feeling of Sunday morning cartoon when computer animations started to be the norm.
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