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'Aquila' narrated fan fiction


A Vox in the Void

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Very fine work sir:thumbsup: Great story, excellent ambiance and narrative work.

 

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I think in the future you might consider altering tone in your narration to fit the character's point of view. For example, using a gentler tone in the beginning, emphasizing the child's point of view and then moving to something more intense as you get to the fight scene. On the whole though, the voice work was very good and you have an excellent voice for narration.
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