2000 Points Imperial Fists (Hammers of Dorn)

[Mitsarugi]

Greeting Brothers

 

I came in second in a tournament on Saturday. I won all my games against Orks/Blood Angels/and Imperial guard,

76/82/78 but the guy who won (Dark Angels), won all of his games 95/95/95, I swear his opponents must have just laid down for him.

 

++ Battalion Detachment 0CP (Imperium - Adeptus Astartes - Imperial Fists) [114 PL, -2CP, 2,000pts] ++ + Configuration + *Chapter Selection*: Imperial Fists Detachment Command Cost + HQ + Captain in Terminator Armour [6 PL, 105pts]: Relic blade, Storm bolter, Warlord Chaplain in Terminator Armour [7 PL, 120pts]: Benediction of Fury, Chapter Command: Master of Sanctity, Litany of Hate, Storm bolter Librarian in Terminator Armour [6 PL, 105pts]: Force stave + Troops + Intercessor Squad [10 PL, 125pts]: Auto Bolt Rifle . 5x Intercessor: 5x Bolt pistol, 5x Frag & Krak grenades . Intercessor Sergeant: Power sword Intercessor Squad [10 PL, 125pts]: Auto Bolt Rifle . 5x Intercessor: 5x Bolt pistol, 5x Frag & Krak grenades . Intercessor Sergeant: Power sword Intercessor Squad [10 PL, 120pts]: Stalker Bolt Rifle . 5x Intercessor: 5x Bolt pistol, 5x Frag & Krak grenades . Intercessor Sergeant: Astartes Chainsword + Elites + Apothecary [5 PL, 90pts]: Chapter Command: Chief Apothecary Centurion Assault Squad [9 PL, 195pts] . Centurion: Hurricane bolter . . Flamers . Centurion: Hurricane bolter . . Flamers . Centurion Sergeant: Centurion Assault Launchers . . Meltaguns: 2x Meltagun Leviathan Dreadnought [13 PL, -1CP, 220pts]: 2x Twin Volkite calivers, Grav-flux bombard . Leviathan siege claw Terminator Assault Squad [9 PL, 215pts] . Assault Terminator Sergeant . . Thunder Hammer & Storm Shield: Thunder hammer . 4x Assault Terminator w/THSS: 4x Storm shield, 4x Thunder hammer + Fast Attack + Inceptor Squad [7 PL, 135pts]: Assault bolter x2, 2x Inceptor, Inceptor Sergeant + Heavy Support + Eliminator Squad [5 PL, 90pts]: Bolt sniper rifle . Eliminator Sergeant: Bolt sniper rifle . 2x Eliminators: 2x Bolt pistol, 2x Camo cloak, 2x Frag & Krak grenades Sicaran Battle Tank [10 PL, -1CP, 220pts]: Heavy bolter, Two Lascanons Whirlwind [7 PL, 135pts]: Whirlwind vengeance launcher ++ Total: [114 PL, -2CP, 2,000pts] ++

 

Any ideas how I can make this better?

[librisrouge]

The first thing I would do to make it better would be to past it without extra formatting and then put all of the units on their own line. Something like:

 

++ Battalion Detachment 0CP (Imperium - Adeptus Astartes - Imperial Fists) [114 PL, -2CP, 2,000pts] ++

+ Configuration + 

*Chapter Selection*: Imperial Fists

Detachment Command Cost

 

+ HQ +

Captain in Terminator Armour [6 PL, 105pts]: Relic blade, Storm bolter, Warlord

Chaplain in Terminator Armour [7 PL, 120pts]: Benediction of Fury, Chapter Command: Master of Sanctity, Litany of Hate, Storm bolter

Librarian in Terminator Armour [6 PL, 105pts]: Force stave

 

+ Troops +

Intercessor Squad [10 PL, 125pts]: Auto Bolt Rifle . 5x Intercessor: 5x Bolt pistol, 5x Frag & Krak grenades . Intercessor Sergeant: Power sword

Intercessor Squad [10 PL, 125pts]: Auto Bolt Rifle . 5x Intercessor: 5x Bolt pistol, 5x Frag & Krak grenades . Intercessor Sergeant: Power sword

Intercessor Squad [10 PL, 120pts]: Stalker Bolt Rifle . 5x Intercessor: 5x Bolt pistol, 5x Frag & Krak grenades . Intercessor Sergeant: Astartes Chainsword

 

+ Elites +

Apothecary [5 PL, 90pts]: Chapter Command: Chief Apothecary

Centurion Assault Squad [9 PL, 195pts] . Centurion: Hurricane bolter . . Flamers . Centurion: Hurricane bolter . . Flamers . Centurion Sergeant: Centurion Assault Launchers . . Meltaguns: 2x Meltagun

Leviathan Dreadnought [13 PL, -1CP, 220pts]: 2x Twin Volkite calivers, Grav-flux bombard . Leviathan siege claw

Terminator Assault Squad [9 PL, 215pts] . Assault Terminator Sergeant . . Thunder Hammer & Storm Shield: Thunder hammer . 4x Assault Terminator w/THSS: 4x Storm shield, 4x Thunder hammer

 

+ Fast Attack +

Inceptor Squad [7 PL, 135pts]: Assault bolter x2, 2x Inceptor, Inceptor Sergeant

 

+ Heavy Support +

Eliminator Squad [5 PL, 90pts]: Bolt sniper rifle . Eliminator Sergeant: Bolt sniper rifle . 2x Eliminators: 2x Bolt pistol, 2x Camo cloak, 2x Frag & Krak grenades

Sicaran Battle Tank [10 PL, -1CP, 220pts]: Heavy bolter, Two Lascanons

Whirlwind [7 PL, 135pts]: Whirlwind vengeance launcher

 

++ Total: [114 PL, -2CP, 2,000pts] ++

 

It is far from perfect but it is a heck of a lot more readable.

 

On first reading, it doesn't look 1/2 bad. A nice mixture of AT and lesser dakka. Some mobility. I would wonder how you plan on getting the two melee units into CC.

[Mitsarugi]

Yes this list lacks mobility and I'm not sure how to solve it without giving up firepower. But I need to get on objectives.