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Ive done a DIY chapter, and egun spinning on a new army, and this crazy idea hit me!

To give you an idea of what Im thinking of!

 

the sixth company of the Knights of Terra had landed on the planet Giarils, to recover a relic that thier librarian had found. after several days they found this huge pyramid wich they entered. after several hours they entered a huge chamber, and in the middle, a perfectly preserved tactical dreadnought suit. the Captain, Leonard, walk down the chamber, closing in on the suit, and laid his hand on it saying "Its time for you to return home". followed by these words a loud bellringing began and all the marines that had entered the chamber, fell to the ground, as if they had been hit by lightning.

Several hours later Leonard awaken, his head spinning. Beside him lay his ornate suit of power armor, and he looked up at the terminators suit, finding it missing. rising up on his feets, he saw that all his fellow marines still laid down, seemingly unconcious.

But something was wron, he could feel it, flowing through his veins. Looking down at what he hought was his bare hands, he saw that they where clad in the ancient terminators armor which they had found here. As he walked around his fallen comrades, a sudden energy flow descended from his armour, and one by one, they all arose.

They marched out from the cursed pyramid to the awaiting troops outside. But as Leonard led his people outside, they where met not b friendly brothers, but by a hail of bolts, missiles and las shots. Suddenly he feelt an urge to spill blood and charged forth, the twin lightning claws Leonard now had cut through any armor clad enemy he stood against.

suddenly all the ones he had led down the crypt was amongst him, spilling the blood of thier former brothers. Seconds later Leonard stood face to face with Librarian Joshua. Joshua unleashed a single bolt of lightning at Leonard. The bolt strucj home, throwing Leonard several feet backwards, his body wrecked with pain and suffering. Joshua had already turned around to face the other heretics when Leonard stood up again. With a mighty roar he charged at Joshua, who was caught with his back at Leonard. Without any effort he lifted Joshua high in the air tossing him away as if he was a ragg doll.

and the second that Joshua hit the ground, leonard was there, holding him in his wrists. Joshua unleashed all the powers he had been given by the Emperor, and Leonard started glowing with a golden light, and was forced to let Joshua go. Tumbling to the ground, exhausted by the great effort to summon all his powers.

But against all odds Leonard stood up again, starting to move towards Joshua again. Again he held on to his wrists, and pulled out, dismembering both Joshuas arms, along with the armor and all. wrecked by this sudden pain Joshua was unable to withhold the powers that was filling Leonards body, and the glowing light dissappeared.

Leonard walked around Joshua so that he stood behind him. Lifting him by his neck, Leonard punshed his second hand through Joshuas body, and then pulling botharms away from eachother, so that the head and body was seperated with a sickening sound. lifting the body high, he started to drink the blood before throwing the corpse away before he joined the fray with his fellow Khornate brothers.

 

Oh, and I will create this chaos army. Calling them Death knights, skull knights or blood knights. Thier colors will be bleached bone and blood red

 

So what you think. The knights of terra chapter is a DIY chapter I made. So will the Inqusition destroy my DIY chapter, or will they be allowed to live on?

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This would get more replies in the Liber Astartes.

 

If only a few of them turned, then the chapter would more then likely cover it up and never tell anyone (like DA) and then try and hunt them down (like DA). They would probably blow the planet up to

 

Ferrata

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I agree with jansuh. The inquisition (If they find out) may not exactly wipe your chapter out but perhaps keep a very close eye on them and perhaps send them on a penance crusade i.e to track down and kill those who turned to chaos. :tu:

 

Also story wise I was confused why the saw the terminator armour on his hands. Also how did his brothers (inc. Joshua )find out they were there and had been tainted by chaos?

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1. he was confused as his power armor lay besides him, and didnt know how the terminator armour had got on him.

2. Joshua being a librarian didnt feel the presence of Leonard or the other marines, but sensed a great evil approaching.

 

And the thing is, that the planet they hold now is drifting towards the eye of terror, and so the planet is on constant move. but they couldnt hold this secret as a nearby recon vesselfrom the IG registred the whole thing.

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to make a story about a whole planet geting sucked in to the Eye of terror can be hard ...

 

planets cirkulate around bigger planets etc.

 

if one planet get sucked away (a big one) the whole system around that would colaps and make a effect that would cause other systems to go berserk and we got a pinball game that most likely would destroy the known universe of man ...

 

if this small planet get sucked in why don

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This is on a smaller scale than the DA, in whose case it was about 4,000 Marines (out of the Legion's 10,000) that turned to Chaos, so the Inquisition might be lenient.

 

If both secrets were uncovered, the Knights of Terra would most likely be sent on a penance crusade.

 

The DA would be declared "EXCOMMUNICATE TRAITORIS" and there would be a breakout of Exterminati in the Piscina system, and 1/3 of the the Grey Knight fleet (nothing less would stand a chance) would be sent to assault the Rock and its escort fleet of battle barges.

 

Your Chapter has it easy compared to the DA, but the story is good, and since they are newer and less powerful, thus less of a threat if corrupted, they could either keep the secret till all of their traitor members were caught OR gain some kind of leniency from the Inquisition.

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at what he hought was his bare hands

 

he is on a planet which is moving through space? i'ts freezing cold then, it's just a large comet, his hands would freeze off in a split second

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