Penitent Dreadnought Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/7235/p42100458pe.jpg http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/8356/castigators10il.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
major_panic Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 Very nice, but where's the trademark fedora hat? <_< Seriously though, love the old armour and the pose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luku Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 Now that is nice..I want one ><_ A marine with a whip? Yipe!...nasty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solinan Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 Wow very cool, beautiful. The chest looks a bit small though IMO... :huh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FaeLi-N Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 I think it's <DELETED BY THE INQUISITION>ing brilliant, seriously... Looks like a marine should. Going to nick a couple of ideas for the "secret" army I'm converting atm :huh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcus Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 Very nice work, proportions are good and the details are superb. The second pic looks good, you've sharpened up the lines of the drawing well. How far are you going to take it ? Big thumbs up :huh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cpt_Tiberius Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 Looking good! :huh: I have a few critiques for you: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Penitent Dreadnought Posted April 24, 2006 Author Share Posted April 24, 2006 It's awfully cool how you can add all the quotes at once... Very nice, but where's the trademark fedora hat? :P I was tempted... The chest looks a bit small though IMO... :P I have trouble with superhuman proportions. That's what I get for basing a drawing off of a GW Marine... How far are you going to take it ? After Veteran Sergeant Jonas is finished, he will be joined by the Castigators' Chapter Master (in terminator armor), along with other various, sundry Castigators personnel and personalities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted April 25, 2006 Share Posted April 25, 2006 A Castigator! :) I think he looks good, he shows a lot of promise. I really like the older-style armour, and the legs look archaic enough to fit well with the style. They do look a bit fat though, compared to his torso/waist and the like. Perhaps if they were slimmed down slightly he wouldn't look so disproportionate. The only problem I have with the leg armour is that the knees look to be poorly-protected. Perhaps if he had kneepads or the like? I don't know, it's just a suggestion. Oh, and of course, he needs purity seals. :wub: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Penitent Dreadnought Posted April 26, 2006 Author Share Posted April 26, 2006 A closer look at Jonas' legs http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/3728/legredo10py.jpg And the armored legs I was using as a base Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 Another picture from the workbench of the Penitent Dreadnought: http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/5691/moreworkoncastigatorjonas0xz.jpg I'm posting it for the ever-reticent Penitent Dreadnought because he's a little busy at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrgreenshoes Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 *cough*sonsofkorhol*cough* :D But anyways, excellent drawing! Keep up the good work, and possibly get more sketch time in for other legions, please! (deathguard deathguard deathguard) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahmato Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 Totally Spiffy work, old boy :D I can't draw, so no critique here, keep it up B) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 *cough*sonsofkorhol*cough* :D But anyways, excellent drawing! Keep up the good work, and possibly get more sketch time in for other legions, please! (deathguard deathguard deathguard) Haha, you can see more regarding the Castigators here. And the fact that their symbol is similar to the Sons of Korhal is just... B) ... coincidence. That's it. B) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cpt_Tiberius Posted May 5, 2006 Share Posted May 5, 2006 This is looking really good. I see the FMA influence now that you point it out. Al is a cool design and I can see why you'd be inspired by him. I think your coming along rather nicely. Your pencil work is well done. How are you going to finish this piece? Pencil, Ink, paint...? I can't get over how well the helmet is turning out. (I also dig his left arm. The pointing hand is looking great). So get the lead out so we can see how this turns out. :wub: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 And another update; the inked version. http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/5606/brotherjonas12sd.jpg and something else from the workbench: http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/2453/castigatorboltgunners8se.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sgt.Rob Posted May 8, 2006 Share Posted May 8, 2006 Cool marines buddy. I dig your line work with ink, nice and clean. Your style would work well in a comic; I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cpt_Tiberius Posted May 8, 2006 Share Posted May 8, 2006 The inked version looks good. My only critique is that it is a bit light on texture, though this could be remedied in the coloring/or painting stage, so not that big a concern. Also I would have used a segmented metal whip instead of the braided look, but that's just my preference. As for your new piece all I can say is :D ! I really dig the body language and the overall rythym of the piece. The Beaky marine is particularly loverly and makes me want to jump back on my drawing board. Please share more when you have it! :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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