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Just a life sing. Was busy with my new work and latley some family emergency. I realized since the last Update i fell back into old habbits with too much from everything and that i bloated the IA unnecsarly up. Till a next more sleek update will take time still, it will cut down here and there and add a bit more flavour to the Equipment. A few ne Battles are on my mind too. It is not dead, but will as said took time until i can bring myself to sit down and start writing again,

Hello again, it took me way longer to took the time and manage to work on this again. Life got derailed 2 years ago and iam slowly on the way to find my feet back firmly. Fell in a rough spot and needed a long time to slowly crawl out. Found new friends and now iam a LotR Tabletop Player =). I worked witth the help of chat gpt, there are some passage i did not complety change. The majority is after a good prompt rewritten to fit my vision. I assume many see it as something difficult, i see it just as a good tool to help me flesh out them more. Afterall all prompts are backed by my handwritten notes (maybe not readable to everyone, my writing sucks). Still i want to be open about its involment in my rework process. More or less i reworked everything, the only not yet are the notable battles. They will follow longer, iam happy to have finshed it more or less for now. Alltough iam now by over 6000 Words, something i will try to reduce again. but this is a battle for later down the road, maybe the next 2 weeks as i worked the last time this year today =) As allways iam happy for all feedback and will try to answer all questions. A blessfull holyday and good year to all of you

I like twist in Chapters. But iam too concerned about the total loyalty to themselves. Maybe reworkt that part, that they think they do the best for the Empire or the Emp himself, and will go if they deemed it necessary against explict order as example. But this Mindset cry for a Inquistor to declare them Traitors.

Hmh and what is if the Kraken Hunt is something new they had to engage in. The Great Rift schocked the Materium badly, possible the Krakens got awakend due this? Just my 2 cents.

Wow nice Artwork. I espically like Samurai Armour parts. I seriously need to look for some art ofr mine projecets too.

Gamiel Ideas sound very nice. Espically with the Shipgraveyard over there world. Something i guess i will copy for myself. I can see a Astartes Chapter to choose desperate measueres to solve there problem. Wargear can be produced local, but Ships are a whole other can of worms. Without proper Yards and a devleoped Forge World, it would be very hard for extensive refits. Therfore it can be good solution, to capture ships at every time and simply cobble it togehter.

The Cultrue Part sound ok. The Doctrine have tow points which in my eyes are contradict your under supplied and insular nature. Teleportain Technolgy is highly advanced and not easy to maintain, you would need good connections to the AM for it sizeable vehicle pool - how do they maintain them? Are they in resoltuion of the points not undersupllied and have build themselves a strong local industial foundation?

And to be fair, i doubt that the DA and Sucessors would overlook this. And to borther a First Founding Chapter scream for trouble.

Due your thematic i would say Deep Sons. Starspawn idk, dosent sound right for me.

I would suggest that the 1st Company may have been lost otherwise the intervention of the BT. And the loss of Terminator Armour would be tremendous and very reasonable to hate the DA Sucessors for the nearly lost of it. Overall iam eager to see more of the Death Watch Part, something i will maybe later add to my Equites Rehnus too in some form. @Björn I was honestly puzzeld what you mean with black legion wanabe. I thought what the f are they smugeling with the Dark Angels? later i understand you meant the BLack Templars.

If the Worlds are old, it is possible that they are already self sufficent and the Terraforming Maschines long borke, or that simmilar to the Culture on the Book of David Weber, Heir of the Imperium. The Civilastion banned technolgy and worship a KI. They use old manuals and tech speech in there Religion. In the books the Imperium used once ball shaped ships, which they covered up as Moons. Maybe they poses such a "Moon" as Monastery, more reasons to not let People sniff around. Even possible that the Ship see the Adepts as "Danger" and activley seek ways to get rid of them. Maybe this allow you some further ideas how to tackle this. Overall a rather good Sci Fi Series.

One Idea towards the Use of Ash from me. Inccoperate s smaal amount in the bolt rounds. So even in Death the Brothers still bring judgement over the foe. Iam sure it can be expanded towards a intrigendt for painting the power armours, Overall i find the idea to origin of a crematorium world very exciting.

New Update Live. It will be the last huge. I stil have many ideas to wrote down, but i fell like i hit a good saturation of coverd topics and a word count around 4450. I dont put them entirly in the stash, but the IA will be finallized soon. From now on, i will spent a bit time to correct failures and orhography. And will add "cosmetic" things like Names or so. Many thanks for all the Help. Iam a bit proud of my Work, after all i worked over a year on it. And you guys were a huge help. If you find any failures, i thank in advance and will correct them.

The Chapter planet already has a Germanic culture, as you previously indicated. You may need to Germanize the Greek names to make them fit, or save them for use on a planet in the same system, one under the Chapter's Aegis. Good point. It is still only a idea. The germanize of it sounds good, i look wikipedia up for it, the germanic panethon offers some fine names. that should fit way better. Quote Do you mean the Marines pray? Such behavior may be common to those from feral worlds- Ragnar Blackmane prays to Leman Russ in William King's novels- but it may be regarded as pointless superstition to those from industrialized worlds. (Yes, I know techpriests pray to the Machine God, but an AdMech member will surely claim his is the "One True God," and look down on other religious beliefs and rituals.) No, i was refering to the chapter planet. More like its a old part of there culture. Old Traditions which still get carried out, something like public holidays and cermonies when someone enter a high postion. Some names remain too. It could. What does the generator do? Power the void shields more effectively/efficiently, making the star fort impregnable? Alter Warp currents so the fort may be transported to distant battlefields more effectively/efficiently, while disrupting enemy attempts to bring in reinforcements within striking distance of the fort? I mostly tend to say, just that it dont need the useally 3000+ year replacment of the System. Maybe allow pseudo warp jumps, simmilar to the tau. Slower but more safe. Cutting ties to the AdMech is a VERY BAD IDEA. Not only does it deny your Chapter training for its Techmarines, it also denies it products from forge worlds (weapons, armor, vehicles, as well as the ammo, fuel, and spare parts to keep these devices useful) and raw materials from mining worlds under the AdMech's control (without which the star fort's onboard manufactories are useless). Iam aware of this. What i meant to say was: The AM Department cut ties towards the greater AM, not the Marines per se. The dire consequenes are known to me. Thanks for the list. The constant merge of Astra Millitarum Vehicles Setups witht he Rhino should strain it enough allready. Which lead to the dedicate Company which search for Archeotec. Having the Chapter take sides during the Moirae Schism can add a lot of history to it, but you have to think carefully on the impact this will have. Assuming the Chapter supported the AdMech Orthodoxy, are there Iron Hands successors who praise your Marines as "true brothers" for aiding the AdMech in purging the Moirae believers, while others (e.g., the Sons of Medusa) condemn them as "kinslayers"? Are there forge worlds permanently silenced because the Chapter subjected the Moirae believers' worlds to Exterminatus, and did doing so deny the Imperium resources it needed to win certain wars? iam not exactly sure about there participation in these times. it offers a possiblitie to gain vital assets, which allow maybe some degree of freedom towards the AM. But it would also lead to some complicate relations with the imperium and its factions. And if your Chapter supported the Moirae believers, what penalties did the AdMech demand be applied to it? Forfeit the Chapter planet and/or the star fort, exile to space where tumultuous Warp currents may destroy the Chapter fleet en route, a century-long penance crusade- to say nothing of continuous difficulty getting the resources the AdMech is duty-bound to provide, due to lingering mistrust? Good point. I would guess a pentient cursade and the forfeit of the fort. Later is afterall during this time still there moanestry. Thanks for your input. I learn few new things and got a better understanding what some decsions would lead towards.