Bjorn Firewalker

Wouldn't that be redundant? I specifically made this IA to be a... certain kind of joke, with Lords Figma (Chapter Masters) Okama of Wholeheart and Biribiri Herrington referring to the Japanese slang "okama o horu" (do NOT look it up while at work) and Billy Herrington.

Note I switched the Aeldari Corsair leader responsible for attacking the Chapter planets, from the older sister to the younger.

I changed the name of a planet the Marines conquered and made a strike cruiser's namesake, from "Grabbys" to "Grabyss," to be less on-the-nose; the Chapter Master's name from "Voss Sexton" to "Okama of Wholeheart" (FYI, it refers to the Japanese slang "okama o horu," which you should NOT look up while at work); and added the following details:

To prevent other Chapters and the INQUISITION from asking inconvenient questions, how about naming one Cohort the "Iron Cohort," and its Centuries "Iron Centuries,"- the leaders will have their ranks and titles appropriately amended- thus identifying them as vehicle crews and support personnel under the leadership of the Chapter's Master of the Forge (Chief Techmarine), and forcing others to NOT count these Marines? The other Cohorts can be identified as "Blood" (Reserve) and "Bone" (Veterans), or "Silver" and "Gold," or whichever designation you think is appropriate.

Thanks!

Have you considered adding triangular auspex antennas to your tanks, to make it look like these tanks have cat ears? In-game, say the "cat ear" auspex allows you to re-roll failed To Hit rolls.

I apologize for the late reply; I only recently recovered from a bout of Writer's Block, and was able to continue work on an IA, which then motivated me to resume visiting this site after a long pause. Ingenious! Are the plants the leaves come from, the host for a type of mold that produces the toxins, and this mold grows VERY WELL when provided with the proteins found in human flesh? How do the jungle fighters protect themselves from the toxin? Do they perform mithridatism, i.e., INTENTIONALLY ingest or inject themselves with small doses of the toxin, to build up their resistance to it? I doubt this is practical for any Astra Militarum unit that's expected to face enemies wielding anything more advanced than bows and arrows. You should include details on situations in which wooden armor and weapons can become practical, to justify this, e.g., the Guardsmen are fighting on a planet with an irregular magnetic field, which can send metal arms and armor in unpredictable directions at unpredictable times; or an enemy released a nanotech weapon that destroys objects made with metal and other inorganic materials, but doesn't affect objects made with wood and other organic materials.

I changed Biribiri Herrington's position to a lieutenant during the Aeldari Corsair raid on the Chapter's homeworlds, and added the following details:

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I just began reading the IA. I appreciate Bloodywraith's imagination, but the following WILL raise eyebrows- in-universe, that of other Chapters and INQUISITORS, which may get the Chapter declared, "Excommunicate Traitoris." You should not BREAK the rules set in the Codex Astartes, but you can BEND them into a pretzel. The Codex limitation of 1000 Marines per Chapter, does NOT include support personnel, e.g., Apothecaries, Techmarines, the crews of a Chapter's many vehicles and warships. I advise reducing the number of Centuries in a Cohort, or the number of Marines in a Century, so the Warborn has only 1000 Marines WHEN EXCLUDING SUPPORT PERSONNEL FROM THE COUNT. You may also exploit the same loophole the Black Templars exploited, i.e., a Chapter may recruit above Codex-mandated limits when on a crusade, in anticipation of casualties it will suffer during the crusade.

I see some typos. Suggested corrections are in brackets.

I also changed the number of Pansyfish who died trying to cross the Rubicon Primaris, from 13 (a direct reference to the Ultramarines, whom the Pansyfish believe to be their progenitors) to 31, after reading the Lexicanum article on Primaris Space Marines. Feel free to speculate why the survival rate is still unusually high.

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I can appreciate Chapters that act completely different to those that supposedly descend from the same Primarch, as such Chapters provide many opportunities for worldbuilding, storytelling, and character development. I created one myself, in the Iron-hearted Angels, Blood Angels descendants who are as merciless towards any weakness as the Iron Hands.

I also promoted Biribiri Herrington from Gutsy Major to Lord Figma (Chapter Master).