Agitated Owl

Edit: I seem to have fixed the code issue. I just re-inserted the code through an edit. Strange that it doesn't work the first time.

Thanks, Gripherius. If no one has any C&C for me, I'll submit it to the Tabula Astartes. Does anyone know why the chapter symbol and the titles aren't centered? I used the center, /center codes, but they're still right-aligned.

Yes, Messor, I keep everything saved in text editors anyway. Feel free to delete the old thread; there's no reason to keep it around.

Index Astartes http://s20.postimg.org/bxqmyif65/Doom_Breaker_Symbol_Transparent.png The Doom Breakers Origins

Take a look at Koschei the Immortal. I don't know if that's the flavor your're looking for, but it's Russian, it's mythical, and it's not very nice. Fluff-wise, I think this is your biggest red flag becuase it's unique. It's a neat idea, but the existing chapters all either view the Emperor as a divine warrior or as an exemplary man - none view him in this light. Could there be an event in the chapter's history or a specific element of Aggelos' native culture that would lead to this cult? Why not? The greater the internal conflict, the farther it can carry the story. A bunch of puritan Blood Angel successors that are even more susceptible to the Black Rage and other defects strikes me as interesting. *Edited for grammar.