Brother-Sergeant Valorum

Hey there! Sorry to be a bother, but I recently changed the color scheme for my Adjudicators, and was wondering if it’s possible to reflect that change on the 1000 Chapter Project. Again, sorry for the trouble.

http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/topic/303938-the-lost-sons-relentless-and-unstoppable-the-helios-guard/?p=3961405 My Helios Guard. I have a painter image and an IA. I hope this is still happening!

Well, the Helios Guard are officially on the Tabula! Thanks to everyone who helped me make it happen!

Well, thank you very much, sir!

That's an awesome bit of grimdark in there. Nicely done! On an unrelated note, did they ever actually catch the traitor companies?

Thanks a lot, I really do appreciate the compliments! I'm thinking I'll polish it a bit more, add or remove a little here and there, and submit it to the Tabula afterwards. I'm a little unclear as to the Tabula requirements, especially for length, so I'm going to look over a few example articles before I decide.

Very cool concept. I like the idea of a fallen BA successor, following the doctrines of another chapter. I also like the explanation as to why they became so grimdark. I would like to know whether they still follow BA tactics, such as maintaining the Sanguinary guard and death company. In addition, do they maintain links with other BA successors, or have they isolated themselves from their brethren? Overall, though, great writing and a really cool Chapter!

A few more edits, particularly in the origins, later history, and homeworld sections.

Again, thanks for the compliments, I really appreciate it! As for their toughness, I was thinking it would be a combination of gene-seed and mental toughness, but your advice might just be worth heeding. I think I'll sleep on it.

Thanks, I really appreciate it! This Chapter has been in the works for a long time, since the release of the 6th edition codex. I saw Iron Hands chapter tactics, and I was hooked!

A few more minor edits made, mostly to the beliefs, battle-cry, and Valodis Llero sections.

More edits made, more advice taken. A never-ending cycle!

Thank you to everyone for the great feedback! I've made more edits, and I hope that the IA is to your satisfaction!