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Skull
Part 6.1
City of Hammish, Imperial World of Lemish II, Lemish System

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And i was really enjoying 

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However I also enjoy Paimun's antics a great deal so i'm not completley sad yet 


The Archangels: Scions of Sanguinious striving for perfection

 

The Impure: Not even the transhuman physiology of the Space Marines can save you from the zombie plague

 

The Silent Laughter: The road to damnation is paved with the best intentions 

 

 

 

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And i was really enjoying

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However I also enjoy Paimun's antics a great deal so i'm not completley sad yet

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Edited by Carrack, 28 March 2016 - 02:41 PM.


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Murder
Part 6.2
City of Hammish, Imperial World of Lemish II, Lemish System

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Give me moar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

I am seriously liking all of this!!



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The Shield
Part 1.4
Aspis, Sub-Sector Seat

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Low Road 27
2.10
Tancrea, the Pillars of Fortitude, Defence Sector 27

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Burning Hatred
Part 6.3
City of Hammish, Imperial World of Lemish II, Lemish System


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Edited by Carrack, 02 April 2016 - 06:47 AM.


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Only a minor thing but stuck with me...

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other than that...

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bit hungry, off to find some na fruit.

 

 

[edit re next post] my misreading, thank you for the explanation as well.

 

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are lasrifle shots affected by gravity?


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@PaulJam. I fixed a few words to make it clear, but in short;
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. As always, thanks for the feedback and taking the time to read.

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Commanding the Fleets
Part 6.4
Lemish System
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A Green Flare, A Big Tree, and a Star

2.11
Tancrea, the Pillars of Fortitude, Defence Sector 27
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Only a minor thing but stuck with me...

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other than that...
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bit hungry, off to find some na fruit.


[edit re next post] my misreading, thank you for the explanation as well.

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are lasrifle shots affected by gravity?

Not in my opinion, the ridge was just out of range, but that didn't stop the guardsmen from trying anyway. Mostly though, they just hanged tough, popped smoke on their tanks, and waited on the marauder to make its reserve roll :) brave dudes. In game terms I put the range somewhere a little over 36", but for the story, I went with the distance between the guardsmen and the renegades as being mostly vertical, and allowed a few hits from the autoguns.

This brings up something I've been trying to improve on. Making my enemies believable threats. I personally feel this is one of the biggest problems I made with Calebra Hive, and most of my stories I've written so far. How do you make the enemy not seem like a bunch of the incompetent goons, without killing off lots of your characters? I'm not that attached to my characters per se, but the only way I can develop them is to have them live, but this means they win more than they lose. I think I've done ok with the stories I've included from the Imperial perspective, but I'm still struggling with doing it from the perspective of "my guys". Ramone is especially hard, because, unless he runs into some gretchin, he is likely to be facing a superior enemy.

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Falling Like Flies
Part 6.5
City of Hammish, Imperial World of Lemish II, Lemish System

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Edited by Carrack, 13 April 2016 - 06:07 AM.


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Carratuge L'ull
Part 6.6
City of Hammish, Imperial World of Lemish II, Lemish System

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Edited by Carrack, 13 April 2016 - 06:07 AM.


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No Time to Feast

Part 7.0
Garland System
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Author Note:
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Tactics

Part 6.7
Lemish System
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Edited by Carrack, 16 April 2016 - 01:47 AM.


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Leaving the Low Road

Part 2.12
Tancrea, The Pillars of Fortitude, Defence Sector 27


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Slipping Away

Part 7.1
Garland System
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The Aspis Subsector in Brief

Part 1.5

Note: this ran long


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Frothing Mad
Part 6.8
City of Hammish, Imperial World of Lemish II, Lemish System
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Edited by Carrack, 20 April 2016 - 04:17 PM.


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Pipping and Braid
Part 2.13
Tancrea, Lorin Pass


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The Magellous Vaults

Part 6.9
Lemish, City of Hammish
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Blood in the Water
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Garland System
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The Experiments
Part 6.10
The Magellous Vaults, Imperial Wotkd of Lemish

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